Reviewer: allibabab Signed
Date: July 28, 2007
Title: Chapter 1: just keep telling me facts
Mmmkay, so how is it that I haven't read this yet? Because yes, yes, YES, and thank you.
...she's always wondered if he'd fit in her car. I want to marry this line, please.
I love that you include how Pam's uncomfortable with everything that's happening, the way Jim's changing her radio stations and leaving his hand on her knee -- it makes sense that they're not going to fall into things easily and perfectly and instantly.
That bit with Pam comforting Michael about Ryan leaving is priceless. The juice and the crying and the TWSS. I love it.
And this whole thing just BREAKS ME for being so realistic in that things don't always work out, even though they should, even though you want them to. There's quite a bit of history between them and sometimes it can be too hard to get past all that.
On the other hand, you could always just continue this and give me a happy ending. I guess I wouldn't really mind that. ;)
Fabulous, my dear. Love to see such a long piece from you!
Author's Response: Haha, I think I originally posted this on LJ when you were in....Brazil? (You went to Brazil, right?) But thank you so much, I'm so glad that you liked it! As for the happy ending, the ending is whatever you want it to be, so you can just imagine away and that is the ending you get! And this is SO LONG, I know - I don't know what got into me, all I've been writing in the past few months are these ridiculously long things. Weird. :)