Typical slow days at the office with the Ladies of Dunder Mifflin.
Way to go, Pam! Too funny.
Wow. The condoms! Too funny. And I am praying to Thor himself that Jim shows instead of Mose.
Nice work!
Author's Response: Hee! You put this review for the very first chapter! I bet everyone reading it will be like wha? "Jim instead of Mose"? What the hell? Hahahaha
Thank the Lord you are SO good about frequent updates... I would die if I thought I might have to go days without knowing what happens next!
So exciting!
Author's Response: A desert island's death would be a terrible thing to witness. Imagine the carnage. The beach bunnies. The cabana boys. The hula dancers. No it mustn't happen! I shall continue to write though my fingers bleed and my bottom grows numb.
I am having so much fun reading this story, but this chapter was excellent! I laughed out loud multiple times. SO funny! Great characteization of Meredith and Angela as they were arguing.
Oooo! It's getting exciting! Can't wait to read what happens next. You write the characters well (I especially like not-so-innocent Karen). I can't wait to see what happens next (but am sad for it to end). Oh, and thanks for the frequent updates!
This is really original and like nothing I've ever read before. The emails are in perfect character. Can't wait for the next chapter!
I just laughed out loud multiple times. Really fun and looking forward to more chapters!
Yay! That chapter was SO good! And such a great ending! Loving this!
As always, a really enjoyable story! Love that Pam put in so much effort, and always love such a happy ending!
Really great imagery. Love the storm and the darkness.
Author's Response: Thank you! My writing teacher always used to tell me that the weather should match the mood. It would sure have been harder to write this scene if Jim was looking out on a bright April morning.
Definitely want to see what happens next! Keep going!
Oh, I wish, wish, wish it would happen like that... Good story.
I love the body part series! I don't know what I'd do without your happy stories! They always put a smile on my face.
Author's Response: thanks so much! I do try to keep us fellow Jam fans happy!
You make it happen just as I wish it would... Thanks for keeping me (slightly) sane until Thursday!
Author's Response: Sanity is relative...thanks for reading and reviewing!
There's a reason Meredith gets drunk on Valentine's Day, and it's not the obvious one. Spoilers through "Phyllis' Wedding". Wow, oh, wow. I love this story you've developed for Meredith. So sad and telling and seems so fitting. I thought the pronouns worked fine, not confusing at all.
Author's Response:
Glad to know the pronouns worked. They can be tricky little devils. Thanks for reading!
It's amazing the magic a simple Valentine's Day card can hold. Throw in a troubled relationship and a good snowfall, and it's a holiday to remember.I am so happy after reading this! Happy Valentine's Day indeed. As usual, you're dead on in characterization and dialogue... and I am a sucker for a happy ending, and I am assuming we're heading to an even happier ending. I am so happy to see ballsy!Pam.
Eight years has passed since Jim and Pam have spoken. Many things have changed in their lives including a little girl that captures their hearts.
This is a really cute story. Am enjoying it, thanks!
Jim, Pam, Pam's 'all time favorite' movie, and the little push they need. Spoilers up to Phyllis's Wedding. A little angst, a little fluff...my first ever Office fic, just a little almost-Valentines Day oneshot I wrote yesterday. Enjoy, feedback would be awesome.I love that movie! And your story totally did it justice. Nice.
Wow. My love of this began with the first few lines and only increased as I read. Really well done.
Author's Response: Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it.
Jim's basketball game with the C.F.O. (not his actual initials) gets interrupted with news from what happened at Poor Richard's; he reacts accordingly.
That was great. I am such a sucker for a happy ending. I think my favorite bit was how you really compared Roy and Jim and how each would react and how each would treat Pam and Pam's realization about that. Nice job!
Author's Response:
If you're a sucker for a happy ending, then I'm your girl; I seem incapable of writing a Jim/Pam story without a happy ending. (That's not true, actually; I wrote a smutty, dark Jim/Jan that decidedly did not end well for anyone but Jan. Ahem.)
I'm glad you liked the Jim/Roy comparisons - sometimes I get too heavy on the interior monologues and it can weigh the story down; I contemplated cutting that, but ultimately left it in because I felt like it's such a distinctive contrast, one that Pam would surely be hyper aware of, you know?
Thanks for reviewing!
"...guilt cloaked itself in the guise of love sometimes..."
So true. I am totally looking forward with the next chapters!
Author's Response: Isn't it, though? Been there, and - ugh. Thanks so much for the review!
"It's time to go all in" is right!
Really enjoying this an dlooking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much, desert island! Hopefully I'll get it finished tonight! Thanks for reviewing -
That was an excellent look at a week in the lives of Jim and Pam. Very enjoyable and well done. As Always, you make me happy with a happy ending, great characterization and excellent writing skills.
Thanks!
Just got caught up with this one. I am liking it and excited to see what happens next! Your Dwight and Creed make me laugh. Well done!
Author's Response:
Yeah they are two of my favorite characters, Dwight in particular has really been coming into his own lately. I mean I love JAM, but aren't Dwight and Angela so sweet! Thanks for the review and I'm so happy you enjoyed it.
Wow! I am always so thrilled to read your great Jim and Pam, and with this I learn you write Dwight extremely well, too.
He was so matter-of-fact and I loved that he checked in with Pam 10 minuties before their scheduled departure.
Yay!
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