Summary: The Brooklyn Bridge, a tiny elephant, dim sum, ancient Mayan princesses. Your basic Sunday in New York.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: None
Genres: Romance, Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes
Word count: 4546 Read Count: 12545 ePub Downloads: 4
Penname: unfold Real name:
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[Report This] Published: June 25, 2008 Updated: June 29, 2008
Reviewer: unfold Signed 
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Date: June 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Fortune Cookie
Author's Response: You know, I was concerned I'd maybe over-detailed this chapter (I love that kind of stuff, but wasn't sure everyone would share my fascination) - so really happy that it worked for you. And, the belt loop - kind of partial to that bit myself. Not sure why, but there was just something about that image that got me. Thanks, as always, so much unfold! More soon, I promise ;-)
10 Date: June 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Fortune Cookie
adfalkjfds. I do not even know what to say to you anymore aside from, 'I LOVE YOU.' This story is just so fantastic and full of detail and and-
I love this especially, 'Pam hooks her finger through Jim’s belt loop as he leads the way up the twisty stairs..'
And everything else too. The way you write them is just so perfect and lovely and sexy even when they're just walking around. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: You know, I was concerned I'd maybe over-detailed this chapter (I love that kind of stuff, but wasn't sure everyone would share my fascination) - so really happy that it worked for you. And, the belt loop - kind of partial to that bit myself. Not sure why, but there was just something about that image that got me. Thanks, as always, so much unfold! More soon, I promise ;-)
Summary: A fluffy drabble and its smutty counterparts. Spoilers for "Weight Loss."
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2223 Read Count: 10674 ePub Downloads: 4
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Drabble, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2223 Read Count: 10674 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2008 Updated: September 29, 2008
Reviewer: unfold Signed
Date: September 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Texting and Driving
Author's Response: <3<3
Date: September 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Texting and Driving
He can’t believe that his first engaged-sex with Pam was in his backseat, pulled up next to a dumpster at the back of a rest stop.
kjasdlfsd. I BELIEVE IT.
Also, hi, ILU. And this. And them. OH.
Author's Response: <3<3
Summary: Post-The Job in three parts. Because who doesn't love that?
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9086 Read Count: 34624 ePub Downloads: 25
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9086 Read Count: 34624 ePub Downloads: 25
[Report This] Published: January 27, 2009 Updated: February 12, 2009
Reviewer: unfold Signed
Date: January 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Etymology
Author's Response: If I can be completely self-involved and honest for a moment, I\'d really like to read what you wrote, if that would be okay. I don\'t have an LJ account. Could you maybe email it to me? My address is on my author page. I ask this because you\'re one of the most prolific, skillful writers here and I\'m just so damn flattered that you would take the time to write/think of my work. I\'m looking forward to hearing what you think of the other two chapters. Thanks so much, unfold.
Date: January 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Etymology
I just spent an inordinate amount of time discussing the brilliance of this fic on my livejournal and am tempted to just copy and paste what I wrote there here, but it's long. Really long. So I won't.
Basically. This is so wonderfully true to these characters and to life and you write in this way that finds me holding my breath and just completely enveloped in the emotions of these characters.
Pam here is wonderful. She is nervous and awkward but still moving forward.
And Jim. JIM. The bedroom scene. Where he's making sure she's okay but at the same time pushing forward because he's human and he has a hard-on and so obviously if she nods, he's going to press on and- Just the way you present both that tenderness and eagerness within him in that one little paragraph is so unbelievably wonderful to me.
Everyone has quoted that "their kiss was hiding in his mouth" line, but seriously. That was brilliant. I also really really loved "a small laugh that dictated the shape of the knot in her stomach." THAT. God. What a glorious sentence.
And him kissing her "without any preamble." No first kiss in any fic has ever felt so completely right and natural. I literally just sort of froze when it happened and then read it again and again to be sure it actually happened.
This review is horribly disorganized and there are so many other things I probably mean to say about this, but. alsdjasdf. Just. Wonderful. Can't wait for the rest of it.
Author's Response: If I can be completely self-involved and honest for a moment, I\'d really like to read what you wrote, if that would be okay. I don\'t have an LJ account. Could you maybe email it to me? My address is on my author page. I ask this because you\'re one of the most prolific, skillful writers here and I\'m just so damn flattered that you would take the time to write/think of my work. I\'m looking forward to hearing what you think of the other two chapters. Thanks so much, unfold.
Reviewer: unfold Signed
Date: February 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Pronunciation
Author's Response: Hi, unfold - thank you again for being so generous with your thoughts last time and thank you for this. I feel like I keep getting little hints from every new episode that airs that affirms the choices I\'m making here. Last night, Pam told us that she had been feeling guilty about her part in the way Jim and Karen\'s relationship ended, which is something I\'ve been touching on a bit here. I may have to turn it up a bit in the last part, if only because I have some sort of confirmation of the guess I\'ve been making. Again, thanks so much. I hope you enjoy the last part.
Date: February 04, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Pronunciation
I'll be a little more brief this time.
I just love the way you capture the ease of these two being together. Though it's not really ease at all because they're both still nervous and unsure about things and yet even that seems easy.
Also, that line about her recategorizing all his eye rolls once she realizes what they actually mean? Wonderful.
And the ending is perfection. Just- alkjsf. Perfection.
Author's Response: Hi, unfold - thank you again for being so generous with your thoughts last time and thank you for this. I feel like I keep getting little hints from every new episode that airs that affirms the choices I\'m making here. Last night, Pam told us that she had been feeling guilty about her part in the way Jim and Karen\'s relationship ended, which is something I\'ve been touching on a bit here. I may have to turn it up a bit in the last part, if only because I have some sort of confirmation of the guess I\'ve been making. Again, thanks so much. I hope you enjoy the last part.
Reviewer: unfold Signed
Date: February 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Definition
Date: February 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Definition
I cannot ever praise you enough. You write the two of them so perfectly and so beautifully. The pacing of this is wonderful. Sweetly and achingly slow and delicate. And the atmosphere you've created in this simple scene is amazing. I love everything about this basically and will probably read this over and over.
Author's Response: Unfold, you\'re so kind. Repeat reads flatter me. I\'m glad you enjoyed it. As I said to another member of this community, I\'m looking forward to getting enough distance from this one so I can read it myself. Thank you again for all of the generous feedback on this one.
Summary: Jim's path crosses Pam's on an overseas flight.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Claustrophobic Spaces, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16120 Read Count: 30714 ePub Downloads: 8
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Claustrophobic Spaces, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 16120 Read Count: 30714 ePub Downloads: 8
[Report This] Published: April 27, 2011 Updated: March 17, 2024
Reviewer: unfold Signed 10
Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Meet Cute
10 Date: September 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 1: Meet Cute
You should know how addicted to this fic I am. It is perfection. I can't even leave any sort of constructive feedback because I am too biased and in love with it. It's really the only fic I come to MTT to read anymore. The way you write these two in this alternate universe: they are the same, but they are mature, different in ways that make sense for who they were. Just- All of the awards for you and this fic. And two updates in a row? You are spoiling meeeee.