Penname: Crystalized Real name: Crystal
Member Since: February 07, 2007

Bio:
I'm turning 30 this year, a single gal in L.A. I really enjoy reading well written fan fiction like that found here on MTT. Jim and Pam are wonderful characters to play with because they have so many flaws, but are still enjoyable and nice people.
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Reviews by Crystalized
Summary: What happens when someone shows up at Pam's apartment building at midnight declaring their love?
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1329 Read Count: 3157 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2008 Updated: January 06, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: January 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Wagon Is Wise

HA! This is terrific! Very funny and clever.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad that you liked the little twist and humor in it. I appreciate the review Crystalized.

Summary: Jim. Pam.  An airport.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance, Travel, Weekend
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1476 Read Count: 3691 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: January 06, 2008 Updated: January 06, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: January 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I can see all of this so perfectly - great job. It's fluff as you said, but also feels very "slice o' life." Always glad to see a story from you!

Author's Response: I'm so glad.  Trust me - it felt real as I was writing it. :)  Well.  The delayed part felt real.  I had annoying people (and not adorably annoying people at that) all around me.    Thanks so much for the review!

Summary: Past Featured StoryPam and Jim reconnect after the events of Casino Night.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1517 Read Count: 6263 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2008 Updated: January 07, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 8
Date: January 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Three Rings and An Answering Machine

I love that song by Mr. Shelton, and this is a great Office take on it. Very nice piece.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm glad you felt like it worked with the song!

Summary: Jim and Pam are engaged. The office reacts.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Oneshot, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1916 Read Count: 5623 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: January 13, 2008 Updated: January 13, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: January 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: All They Do Is Smile: They've Been in Remarkably Good Moods

Sooo freaking adorable. I love all the THs!
"Well. God created the outdoors. Perhaps he'll forgive you." Jim crossed his fingers. "Countin' on it."
This exchange is classic. HA!

Author's Response: hehehe...that seemed to be a crowd pleaser! You never know what people are gonna dig the most! lol. I think my favorite was Stanley talking about giving them the toaster. lol

Summary: Pam has to stay to do late inventory with Jim, which Roy isn’t too thrilled about. She’s decided after a few hours she doesn’t care… jim/pam season 2
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 21472 Read Count: 39530 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: January 17, 2008 Updated: February 23, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: January 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: rooms and paper cuts

Sorry I have not been reviewing, but I really like this story. I am interested to see what happens next! I really think this observation is well written and cool:
Life was too much like rooms; a series of rooms. And who she got stuck with in those rooms; added up to whatever her life would be.

Fate had a funny way of sticking her in rooms with Jim all the time.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 8
Date: February 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: The morning after

It was almost as if he’d left a gash and now her blood was rushing to the surface and leaving the wound, draining her.

I love this description of a blush/flush.

This by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 24] 16
Summary:

Just a little one-shot I actually started a long time ago.  It's set immediately post DM Infinity and is a shameless bit of fluff with a pinch of steam.  :o)

As always, feedback is much appreciated!  


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: None
Genres: Fluff, Inner Monologue, Oneshot, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1234 Read Count: 5161 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: January 18, 2008 Updated: January 18, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: January 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Aww...just AWWW!  This is so lovely.

Author's Response: Thanks so much -- I'm glad you liked it!  And thanks, too, for taking the time to review.  :o)

Summary: Past Featured Story

You were wrong about the sex.  Not about how great it would be, no, but how you would stop being consumed with thoughts of her 24 hours a day once you could be with her.


Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2493 Read Count: 11006 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: January 19, 2008 Updated: January 19, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: January 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: I'm like the needle, needle and spoon

Whew! That is just some extremely well written smut. Fabulous job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Crystalized!  It was a ton of fun to write and I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

Summary: Jim must deal with a family crisis.  Pam helps him to get through it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 79354 Read Count: 184377 ePub Downloads: 47
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2008 Updated: February 05, 2011
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: February 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Preparations

This is so great - I'm on the edge of my seat for more!

Author's Response: Thanks!  I'll try to keep you there for a while!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: February 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: With This Ring

Oh Pam, telling the truth dressed up as a lie. And Jim, wanting a lie to be the truth when it already is. Those crazy kids. Great chap - love their vows.

Author's Response: Thanks, Crystalized.  Wow, my chapter sounds positively Shakespearean the way you describe it.  All those little twists and mistakes of perception... Thank for taking the time to review.

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Date: March 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Don't Get Lost

YAY! So happy to see another chapter of this one, and it's still great. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your kind words!  I was nervous that not enough "happened" in this little chapter.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: April 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: The Arrival

I am so happy to see a new chapter, I thought this one was dead in the water! I am very scared for Jim, but happy that Pam is there with him. They are so convincing that they should just go ahead and get married in the hospital chapel, right ;)

This is a unique story and it has quite a different voice and tone than others, so I hope to read more!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review.  Cardiac Care really was pretty much dead in the water.  I just had to get over the whole intimidation thing... If you're enjoying the story, you can thank berrycakefan and Kimmerz for the push they gave me in their review.  Plus, I felt really bad that I would have wasted a lot of chelibelle's time if I didn't use the information she gave me by writing some more chapters.  Mr. Blood is heading back to CA tomorrow (previous trip was cut short in the middle), so I will be able to write in the evening w/o feeling guilty!  Hopefully, I'll get another chapter done in a few days.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review.  Cardiac Care really was pretty much dead in the water.  I just had to get over the whole intimidation thing... If you're enjoying the story, you can thank berrycakefan and Kimmerz for the push they gave me in their review.  Plus, I felt really bad that I would have wasted a lot of chelibelle's time if I didn't use the information she gave me by writing some more chapters.  Mr. Blood is heading back to CA tomorrow (previous trip was cut short in the middle), so I will be able to write in the evening w/o feeling guilty!  Hopefully, I'll get another chapter done in a few days.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 10
Date: September 17, 2009 Title: Chapter 33: Trust Yourself

HOLY CRAP to the pictures - gorgeous!

Really love this chapter and all the forward motion in it. Really enjoyed the descriptions of Jim's dread and his inadvertent smiling.

Author's Response: Thanks, Crystallized!  I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and the little side trip to Maui.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: May 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Larissa

Hey! There is a lot of medical stuff, but as long as we get schmoopy Jamness eventually ;) I can deal...
Glad to see another chap! And poor Jim.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Crystalized!  We'll get schmoopy in a couple of chapters!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: June 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: A Dark Night Continues

Another wonderful chapter! Sorry I'm not more eloquent - I'm stuck at an airport!

Author's Response: Thanks for taking the time!  Are you grounded tonight with all these storms?  I hope you're not stuck for long.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: June 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: So Tired

wee chapter is better than nothing! :) look forward to what's next...

Author's Response: You all are SO forgiving!  Thanks very much!  I hope to have the next chapter up in a few days.  I have to really decide just how bad off old Ted Halpert really is...

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: July 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: PDA at Lunch!

Aww...feel better!! This chapter was super cute! I want more!!

Author's Response: Thanks, Crystalized!  More will be forthcoming!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: July 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Interlude

You're spoiling us with all the newness!! Important question - when are they going to give in and kiss again (for real)? Hee :)
Hope you're feeling better!!!

Author's Response:

All this feed back has definitely been the one bright side of feeling so crappy for the past two days!  I'm so happy you're enjoying my new chapters!  Not sure exactly when they'll get physical...

Thanks for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: July 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Guest Accommodations

Wow - what a flat-out lovely chapter. Oh Jim, I'm sure Pam won't mind the one bed. At all.

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Date: July 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: The Beacon

Pam rocks. That is all.

Author's Response: I'm glad you like my strong Pam!  Thanks a lot.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: July 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Conversations with God, Parents and the Walker Man

I love Jim's envisioning of his conversation with God. The descriptions of Pam's actions as they wait for the elevator are very moving. :) Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thanks very much for your feedback!  I'm glad you're enjoying. 

As I told NanReg, next chapter up is being a struggle.  Hopefully, I'll beat it into submission soon.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: July 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Friday Night

I did not expect Jim to get an information dump about Pam's true reactions/feelings, but I've gotta admit I like it and appreciate where it allows the story to go.

Great descriptive work on Pam and Jim's internal feelings, also.

Author's Response: Thanks!  I'm glad you liked "the information dump" and that it was unexpected.  This was actually one of the first scenes of the whole story that I'd planned in my head.  I knew all along that I wanted these brainy girls to overanalyze Jim and call him on being such an ass.

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Date: July 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Fair Dinkum Drongo

Wow, its kindof all out there, now, yeah? I mean, Jim knows, right? But does Pam...or does she think he's over him because of Karen??

Author's Response:

Hmm ... not quite sure what Pam thinks?  We will have to see ...

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: July 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: She Felt Whole

Lovely - short and oh so sweet!

Author's Response: Thanks, Crystalized!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: August 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 25: Saturday Morning

Ooh, flirty! I love the archaelogic study of the bed: sheet location, warmth, etc.

Author's Response: Archeologic study!  Now that's pretty funny.  Glad you enjoyed it.