Penname: Crystalized Real name: Crystal
Member Since: February 07, 2007

Bio:
I'm turning 30 this year, a single gal in L.A. I really enjoy reading well written fan fiction like that found here on MTT. Jim and Pam are wonderful characters to play with because they have so many flaws, but are still enjoyable and nice people.
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Reviews by Crystalized
Near to You by xoxoxo Rated: M [Reviews - 85] 42
Summary: Updated with a new chapter placed BEFORE the epilogue.  AU version of The Convention.  Jim does know who to call after he breaks into Dwight's room.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Michael, Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13036 Read Count: 40459 ePub Downloads: 18
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2008 Updated: August 16, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: May 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Do you want fries with that?

Yay! I wondered when we were going to get an update. Can't believe I got my hotel sex! :)

And you are so funny - I have this image of a typewriter with a whip now - sorry!

Author's Response:

Well you got your hotel....pre-sex.  You'll have to see what the next chapter actually has in store.

Go ahead - laugh.  This story really is beating me up.  It's fighting me every step of the way. 

I'm determined to win though. :)

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: June 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Epilogue: Summer in the City

Awww, nice last chapter xoxoxo!

Author's Response: Thanks so much Crystalized!  I'm so glad you liked it.

June 10th by wendolf Rated: M [Reviews - 235] 95
Summary: Past Featured StoryImagine Jim’s confession on Casino Night never happened and Pam actually made it down the aisle on June 10th . . . only to say “I don’t”.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33398 Read Count: 142910 ePub Downloads: 29
[Report This] Published: March 24, 2008 Updated: April 18, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: March 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Here Comes the Bride

Oh, I really like this premise! You'ce captured Pam's voice very well. I like these little descriptive bits:
"She could follow directions. She’d always been good at that – following what she was supposed to do."
"...the entire office of Dunder Mifflin-Scranton and God."
"She wondered if she had EVER thought for herself."

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: March 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Ahem...

Awesome =
"Didn’t Buddah or Sting or someone say something about “if you love someone, set them free…”?

Ah, that was bullshit."

Author's Response: That Buddah/Sting thing struck a chord with lots of folks! Glad you liked it, too! Thanks for commenting, Crystal!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: March 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Aftershock

I really enjoyed Pam's "Jim Sodoku" puzzle. That is so exactly how I would try and figure out what was happening in my brain. Glad that Pam is ultimatley relieved with her choice!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: March 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Give the Girl a Life Saver

"Jim looked down at her, into her eyes that were so much like Pam’s. And he realized: she knew. She knew what was going on." I love this moment. It is so maternal and I can see it so vividly in my mind.

Author's Response: Thanks Crystalized! Glad you liked that bit.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: March 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Honeymoon Suite

“Haven’t you been that guy for, like, three years?”
So true and so funny! Love B n' C shoutout - hee! Really enjoyed hearing Pam's grandma's advice, too. Oh, I anticipate and look forward to Suite tension!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: March 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: The Chocolate Whisperer

That kiss is very hot. The whole onion paragraph is so beautiful and a wonderful description of Pam's past, present and future feelings.

Author's Response: Mmm. What kiss with Jim isn\'t hot? Glad you liked the onion thing . . . I understood in my mind what I wanted to say but wasn\'t sure it came across clearly... Thanks so much for your comments!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: March 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: State of Arousal

Oh, Jim, being all noble and what not! Such a good guy. I think that giving her the 2nd reassuring kiss was a good idea. Have a great weekend!
"He couldn’t really be sure – kiss interpretation was not his forté."

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: March 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Fresh Start

LOVE the headlines - they are so funny and I can totally imagine Pam thinking them! Also love this: "And not just any guy, but her smoking hot best friend guy..."
Oh, Slutty Soap Opera Pam, it's going to be okay!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: March 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Vacation Time

"Maybe he thought that the best thing he could do was just give her a little time and a little space to work things through so that he didn’t somehow become a casualty of her post traumatic stress."

Jim=Smart Cookie. It's good for her and for him that he goes. Since in this AU she won't have the whole year to "find herself" she could certainly use the 2 weeks! :)

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: April 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Keep on Swimming

"just keep swimming, just keep swimming" I love Nemo and this is a great manta for Pam to have. Also, I just read the last 3 chaps and dude, are those kisses sexy!

Summary: Past Featured StoryHe goes out, he works, he does not call Pam, even when he's drunk and calls the office, he somehow gets Dwight's extension instead of the main desk, and the following Monday he recieves a very long pamphlet on alcohol abuse, narrated by a green panda.

Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4059 Read Count: 4372 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: April 12, 2008 Updated: April 12, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: April 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This is really crazy good. Like, insanely good. Here are some of my fav bits:

"So he kisses her, he has nothing to lose.?He loses."

"At some point, he forgot how to be by himself. He needs his buddy to tell shit to. Even if nothing else."?
"A month after the merger, he realizes that he can't remember what it's like to not live a complete lie. No, no, really, Pam is my best friend! Karen is amazing! Pam and I are totally friends again!"?

Summary: Past Featured Story


NOW COMPLETE!!!

"Jim, why don't you tell Pam how you really feel?" 

 Jim and Pam deal with the stuff that comes with being on a hit show...talk shows, radio call-ins, and press junkets. They say there's no such thing as bad publicity, but is that really the case? Watch as Jim and Pam deal with being in the public eye and under the thumb of manipulative network producers. The story is told through interviews, transcripts, web pages and photos.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Jim and Pam, Past
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, In Stamford, Inner Monologue, Romance, Travel
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 21 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 54070 Read Count: 70553 ePub Downloads: 32
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2008 Updated: March 15, 2009
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: November 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: INTERVIEW: Timelines and Loose Ends

Oh, intrigue!! And thanks for the exposition, now I feel prepared for what's to come.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: May 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Transcript : The Dr. Stephanie Wilkins Show

The last few sentences of this chapter are very visceral.

WOW. This is getting good *rubs hands together in glee* What o' what happens on the Today Show? And who is Anna with?? Dying to know!

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review and I’m so glad you are intrigued by my teasers. I have something pretty special planned for the Today Show so I hope it doesn’t disappoint. Thanks again.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: May 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Interview: On the Inside

Great chapter - the voice of Jim is really great and I love the description of his eyes. Your writing is very vivid.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much. I'm of the opinion that one of Krasinski's greatest acting assets (besides natural talent, of course) is the expressive nature of his eyes. I'm glad you think I managed to capture some of that.

Thanks so much for your review. 

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: May 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Exhibit 72-D : Itinerary for California Promotional Trip

Hey, I work at one of the places on day one! And Creed on Jim Ladd? Lord Have Mercy.

Anyways, good chapter, and once again with the imagery!
Love this:
"Standing on the deck of the ship, watching the moonlight ripple off of the dark water below and feeling the brisk air that was just begging to snow, he had realized that the solution to his problem was actually quite simple."

Author's Response: Oooh! So at least I got my list of "real" things right.  I honestly couldn't think of anything for Creed to do or anything the network would want him to do. I figured that he could talk about music with Jim.  Thanks for your review. I really appreciate it.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed
Date: June 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Interview: Cross Purposes

Magically delicious! Glad to see a new chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm going to do my best to update more frequently. I appreciate your review!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: July 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Interview: We tried

EDGE OF SEAT!! What the heck happens?!? God, this story is so freaking good!!!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 10
Date: August 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Interview: Sticking Like Glue

I'm in a 2 am post-Olympic haze, but DAMN. Great chapter and I think my heart stopped beating a little there at that last line. I continue to love and adore this story and the creativity you show with the way it is presented.

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: October 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: TRANSCRIPT: RADIO TRANSMISSIONS

Glad to see another chapter and also glad that Jim has that sense of freedom that comes from getting such a huge load off his chest. I continue to really appreciate the unique format of this story.

Author's Response: Thanks, Crystallized!  As bad as Jim's confession may have seemed to him, I've always believed that he didn't regret it.  I'm so glad you like the format of this story. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 10
Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Exhibit L-98 A Letter From Pam

Great chapter. Answers some things and still leaves others unknown. The middle Swank part is lovely to read.

So...Toby, eh?

Author's Response:

Yeah, Toby.  I started this story way back in April last year, so it kind of went AU in the Toby regard after GT. So yeah, Anna and Toby are together.  Thanks for your review of this chapter and your appreciation of what happened with Hilary :)

 

Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: February 27, 2009 Title: Chapter 19: Exhibit 108-ANON Photograph

Oh, cool twist! Can't wait for the final 2! :)

Author's Response: Thanks for your review and I'm glad you liked the twist.

Summary: All Jim was planning to do was buy a shirt at the mall...the rest kind of snowballed from there. Spoiler from the Chair Model episode.

Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2202 Read Count: 3957 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: April 17, 2008 Updated: April 17, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 9
Date: April 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Mall Map Says I'm Here, but that's completely WRONG...

I am grinning like the biggest loon EVER. This is so well-done. Love the brother phone call at the end.

Summary: Jim and Pam are next door neighbors in their early 20's and have known each other their whole lives. Jim's brother Jonathan and Pam are best friends and Pam does not like Jim at all... or does she? AU (ya think?!)
Categories: Jim and Pam, Past, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam, Other, Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Angst, Childhood, Drunk Pam/Jim, Holiday, Humor, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy, Wet Pam/Jim
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 29666 Read Count: 75075 ePub Downloads: 13
[Report This] Published: April 20, 2008 Updated: May 16, 2008
Reviewer: Crystalized Signed 8
Date: April 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Surface of the Sun

The Jon/Pam banter is very good! I really like the premise of this story. I get scared about reading WIP, but it seems like you know where you're going! Good job so far!

Author's Response:

I don't blame you for being scared...I'm a little scared myself! I do know where I'm going, I just hope you like it...

Thank you!