10Summary: Jim and Pam redefine some things they thought they knew as they find their way to one another. Spoilers through The Return.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Fluff, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: No
Word count: 42984 Read Count: 69803 ePub Downloads: 8
Penname: lapdogdesign Real name: EM Anderson
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[Report This] Published: February 15, 2007 Updated: May 19, 2008
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: March 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Overreaction
Date: March 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Overreaction
I love their pranks on Dwight, and could totally see them doing this. And "I want to marry you someday"? *fangirly sigh*
More, please!
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: April 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Frightening
Date: April 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 12: Frightening
This is one of my favorite stories going right now...I always get excited for an update, whether I find it on ff.net or here at MTT.
Oh man...Pam not wanting Jim (either of them really) to go to New York. Eek. You can't just shoot one person's life-changing proposition down like that. Compromise is better than an outright "no."
Then, she's in a car accident? OMG! Can't wait for the next chapter, seriously.
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9768 Read Count: 14882 ePub Downloads: 4
Jim's with Karen. Pam's with Roy. Misery all around until Pam fights to find her passion again. In her art and in her love life.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9768 Read Count: 14882 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: February 15, 2007 Updated: February 21, 2007
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Date: February 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Colors
Author's Response: Karen has intense eyes. But Pam has stamina! =-D
Date: February 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Colors
Oooh
I love this. The idea that Karen tore down the flyer...I could totally see that. And the convo between Jim and Pam on the roof felt really in character for me, for how things are in canon at the moment.
Yay for strong(er) Pam! Let the staredowns continue!
Author's Response: Karen has intense eyes. But Pam has stamina! =-D
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Michael, Roy
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5480 Read Count: 12069 ePub Downloads: 2
Wishful thinking for a Jim/Pam fan who's convinced it'll all work out, but is sick of waiting.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam, Michael, Roy
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5480 Read Count: 12069 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: February 16, 2007 Updated: February 22, 2007
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: February 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Date: February 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Can I just say I loved your backstory on the outfit that Pam wore to the art show, and especially her iner thoughts about Roy in relation to her art. So spot on. You pointed out things I hadn't even realized about their dynamic. And my mom and I would have had the same discussion about the jumper looking like something an artist would wear.
OMG, she sent the last e-mail? Or all of them? Eeeee! I was so sad to see that Jim didn't show up at the art show, even if Michael's appearance did have me in tears. Can't wait to see what you bring us in the next chapter...
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: March 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Date: March 09, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I missed this conclusion when you posted it, so it was a pleasant surprise to find it today. I think I held my breath as I read this chapter...it was so good and intense and cathartic. And as I finished, a pleased sigh and smile were my reaction. Just lovely. Added to favorites.
Author's Response: Thanks so much - I'm glad you liked it! This is one of those stories that just came out of nowhere, and I had to get it out. :o) Thanks for the review!
Summary: Courage and honesty were not her strong points but subtlety is. A series of moments that help explain Pam's art pieces. Spoilers through Business School
I've been having problems with posting my entire chapters so re-read the chapters to make sure you've gotten all of it. They should be fixed now... hopefuly!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Roy
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5108 Read Count: 14001 ePub Downloads: 2
I've been having problems with posting my entire chapters so re-read the chapters to make sure you've gotten all of it. They should be fixed now... hopefuly!
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Roy
Genres: Fluff, Romance, Workdays
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5108 Read Count: 14001 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: February 17, 2007 Updated: March 05, 2007
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: February 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Bowl of Fruit
Date: February 21, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Bowl of Fruit
I love the backstory on each of the seemingly simple, innocuous items Pam included in the art show. I'm just a little sad anticipating that after all the thought Pam put into her selections, given the significance of these pieces, that the one person (Jim) for whom they would mean as much doesn't even get to see them at the art show...that we know of. Hmm....
Looking forward to more!
Summary: Jim gets back from the managers' party to find Pam waiting for him.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2212 Read Count: 12546 ePub Downloads: 1
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2212 Read Count: 12546 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 22, 2007 Updated: February 22, 2007
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: February 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Author's Response:
Date: February 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
Oh, thank you for this lovely follow up to 'Cocktails'. I'm unspoiled, but I KNEW there would have to be a serious cliffhanger involving Jim/Pam going into the post-sweeps reruns... I sure wasn't expecting crazy!Roy the screamer-slash-mirror-smasher. This fic was just what I needed to settle down my OMG!WTF! reaction to the show.
Nicely done.
Author's Response:
I'm never unspoiled, and even I didn't expect that!
Thank you!!
Summary: 
Pam calls Jim to warn him about Roy. Takes place immediately after Cocktails.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1172 Read Count: 6950 ePub Downloads: 0
Pam calls Jim to warn him about Roy. Takes place immediately after Cocktails.Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1172 Read Count: 6950 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2007 Updated: February 24, 2007
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: February 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Warning
Date: February 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Warning
That was perfect. I'm just going to imagine this actually happened, while we're stuck waiting for six long weeks.
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31449 Read Count: 115947 ePub Downloads: 34
Jim's basketball game with the C.F.O. (not his actual initials) gets interrupted with news from what happened at Poor Richard's; he reacts accordingly.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31449 Read Count: 115947 ePub Downloads: 34
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2007 Updated: March 18, 2007
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Date: February 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review - and I'll post that playlist at the end of the next chapter. Thanks again!
Date: February 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
I love that Pam recounted her exact description of the Casino Night happenings to Jim - that she kissed him, that she had feelings for him...that it wasn't one-sided.
And add me to the list of folks who wants to see Pam's "Jim" playlist. I love to see what other fans consider 'Jim/Pam songs'.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review - and I'll post that playlist at the end of the next chapter. Thanks again!
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: March 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you liked it - more's on the way. Thanks for the review!
Date: March 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
His voice was hoarse, a verbal acknowledgement that he was at her mercy.
Still.
You have killed me with those lines. *sigh* Beautiful.
More, please.
Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you liked it - more's on the way. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: March 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Author's Response:
Date: March 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
Great chapter, as always. I really like that we're seeing the fallout of their decision. So many fics have Karen conveniently transferring immediately post-breakup and Roy never coming out of the warehouse again, and Jim and Pam blissfully happy forevah (and I love those stories too) but it's good to also see the very real consequences of all of their decisions.
I loved their matching heartbeats in the elevator...you built very effective tension in the weeks prior to the elevator ride, so much so that I was almost holding my breath as they gazed at each other.
Can't wait to read what you have in mind for the final chapter, though I'll be sad to see this story end.
Author's Response:
You know, it's interesting that you commented on seeing the fallout; I'm guilty of transferring Karen immediately after it all blows up in previous fics ("Off you go - here, have a nice ham as a consolation prize...."), but in this one, I did want to do something different (for me, anyway). It also would give Pam and Jim more incentive to keep things quiet as well.
I'm really glad you found the elevator scene effective, too. Thanks so much for reviewing!
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: March 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Author's Response: So glad I left you satisfied and smiling (couldn't resist!). And the smut has arrived! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: March 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
Oh, this was just so satisfying, even without the steam. The knowing looks, the smiles, the amazement that they're finally here. Gah. It's so awesome. And these bits were just the perfect ending to the chapter:
...a thought suddenly struck her: It's time to go all in.
So she simply said, "To the future...to walking toward it instead of trying to run away from it.
*sigh*
You left me with a huge grin at the end. Now, bring on the smut!
Author's Response: So glad I left you satisfied and smiling (couldn't resist!). And the smut has arrived! Thanks for reviewing!
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Episode Related, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2671 Read Count: 7232 ePub Downloads: 1
Jim checks his voicemail after the cocktail party.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Other, Episode Related, Present
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Drabble
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 2671 Read Count: 7232 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: February 23, 2007 Updated: February 26, 2007
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Date: February 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Date: February 27, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
Oooooh! I love the way this story is going...and Jim and Karen are still just in the car! Can't wait to see what you have in store for us next. Update soon!
Summary: Pam's trying to deal with the aftermath of Cocktails (so spoilers through Cocktails of course). Hopefully, through all the fear they will find each other.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12314 Read Count: 68966 ePub Downloads: 11
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Ensemble, Jim, Jim/Pam, Karen, Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12314 Read Count: 68966 ePub Downloads: 11
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2007 Updated: March 19, 2007
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Date: March 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Dwight, What is Going On?
Date: March 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Dwight, What is Going On?
I like this a lot! I love Pam's outfit, her throwing the cell phone out the window, and I love how you involved Dwight in the story. Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you thank you! I just always feel bad ass in boots, and thought Pam could use a lift. As for the cell phone, I'll admit to thinking about Alias on that one, where Syd throws he cell in the ocean? (Ok sorry another addiction). And I just love Dwight. :-)
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: March 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Jim Should Have Kept His Mouth Shut
Author's Response:
Date: March 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: Jim Should Have Kept His Mouth Shut
Sticking with you? Please. This is a great story! I can't wait to read more.
Stanley just sitting there unmoved, Angela with the pitcher of water, Kelly keeping Ryan out of the fight, Michael hiding under his desk, Dwight proudly using his deputy moves when he escorts Roy out -- its the great use of the ensemble in your fic that makes me like it so much. Plus, I just love Creed's little statements - always getting everyone's names wrong. Cracks me up amidst all the tension. Nicely done.
Author's Response:
I think that, especially lately, with all the JAM frustration, the ensemble is what gets me through. Dwight holding Pam while she cried, Michael buying her art. Maybe I'm just a sucker, but I loved seeing that despite it all these people care about each other. Oddly, something I think Jim and Karen are the only ones who don't get that. Oh, and Stanley of course. ;-)
Thanks for the review, this has been a fun one for me too. And I'm so happy and flattered knowing people like reading it. Makes me feel better about the dance of joy I do when some of my favorite stories have been updated.
Summary:
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: Jim To The Rescue
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6251 Read Count: 35530 ePub Downloads: 4
The aftermath of Cocktails (NOT part of my AU universe).
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen
Genres: Angst, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Challenges: Jim To The Rescue
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6251 Read Count: 35530 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: February 25, 2007 Updated: March 03, 2007
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Date: March 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: On the Rocks
Author's Response: Yay!!! It's been favorited!!! That makes my day! Thanks so much for the feedback...Roy is such a tool, but pretty funny somtimes.
Date: March 01, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: On the Rocks
This story is really good! I'm loving all these post-"Cocktails" fics all you great writers are coming up with!
Favorite part so far:
“God you can’t even trash talk the right way,” Roy said laughing again. “Are you sure you made it with this guy Pam? He’s so gay.”
God, Roy would absolutely say this. SO in character.
Man, I can't WAIT to read what comes next! Adding this to favorites.
Author's Response: Yay!!! It's been favorited!!! That makes my day! Thanks so much for the feedback...Roy is such a tool, but pretty funny somtimes.
Summary: Yup, it’s a post-Cocktails fic! With a bit of a twist. Karen does a bad thing, and Jim is about to suffer the consequences…
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jan, Jim/Pam, Karen, Michael, Roy
Genres: Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31515 Read Count: 137987 ePub Downloads: 43
Yup, it’s a post-Cocktails fic! With a bit of a twist. Karen does a bad thing, and Jim is about to suffer the consequences…Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jan, Jim/Pam, Karen, Michael, Roy
Genres: Weekend
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content, Violence/Injury
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31515 Read Count: 137987 ePub Downloads: 43
[Report This] Published: February 27, 2007 Updated: April 16, 2007
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: March 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Truth
Author's Response: Heh. Glad you write the kiss confusion thing. I read the idea on Office Tally and used it in one of my other fics. Since then I've decided that it's my own special fic canon :) Glad you like the cliffhanger too!
Date: March 05, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Truth
OH WOW! I never thought of Jim telling Karen about the drunken kiss at the Dundies but not Casino Night. I repeat...wow. I could see it playing out just that way in canon, too.
And man, you know JUST when to end a chapter. I'm on pins and needles here! Great job. Seriously.
Author's Response: Heh. Glad you write the kiss confusion thing. I read the idea on Office Tally and used it in one of my other fics. Since then I've decided that it's my own special fic canon :) Glad you like the cliffhanger too!
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: April 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Strength
Author's Response:
Date: April 02, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Strength
Awesome, awesome, awesome.
I've never seen anyone have Jim face up to all the times that he's hesitated, while never giving Pam the chance to do the same even once.
He’s stunned by the new view of his own actions.
Me too, Jim.
Well done! Yours is a fic that I get excited to see an update to. Can't wait for your next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, thanks, thanks! :)
As I was writing, it just occurred to me, "Hey... Jim's hesitated plenty of times!"
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: March 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Burn
Author's Response: Yay for the snowglobe love! I completely agree with you on Jim. He couldn't have noticed that he was using Karen and Katy. He's too much of a nice guy. Thanks for the review!
Date: March 20, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: Burn
So, so good. I loved the snowglobe imagery. I also loved Jim finally having enough drama for the night, and when he realized he did use Karen (and Katy). I honestly think he doesn't realize it, even in canon.
Author's Response: Yay for the snowglobe love! I completely agree with you on Jim. He couldn't have noticed that he was using Karen and Katy. He's too much of a nice guy. Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: March 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Collision
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that the suspense was still there for you. In the next chapter, it's going to wind down a bit.
Date: March 08, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Collision
Uh...wow. I think I was holding my breath through that whole chapter. This is really good. Intense.
More, please!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad that the suspense was still there for you. In the next chapter, it's going to wind down a bit.
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: March 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Questions and Answers
Author's Response: Excellent use of twss! Bravo! Thanks for the review :)
Date: March 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Questions and Answers
Oh my goodness. SO intense. SO good.(TWSS!) Just...wow.
Yeah, that's all I got.
More, please!
Author's Response: Excellent use of twss! Bravo! Thanks for the review :)
Summary: The Sunday after Cocktails Jim and Pam wallow in their own struggles before things finally take a turn. My first one of these ever. My apologies if I mess up on any points of etiquette. Definitely for hardcore Jam fans only. A solid R rating.
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly, Michael, Roy
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5668 Read Count: 16973 ePub Downloads: 9
Categories: Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Karen, Kelly, Michael, Roy
Genres: Romance
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5668 Read Count: 16973 ePub Downloads: 9
[Report This] Published: March 03, 2007 Updated: March 07, 2007
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: March 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-4
Author's Response:
Date: March 07, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-4
Ok, so you have to tell us: What's the 'Halpert Special'? :D
Nice job! I especially liked the insight into Roy's thoughts about Pam (he's really that uncomplicated, isn't he?) and Jim 'reasoning' with Roy while sitting atop his chest. Very cool.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! Jim's solution to the Roy dilemma was actually the part I was proudest of. The Halpert special is the move described in the story with the fingers/tongue combination.
Summary: Pam's discovered the world of internet chat rooms. Jim can't resist the chance to be near her in cyberspace. Spoilers up to Cocktails.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84660 Read Count: 289089 ePub Downloads: 115
Pam's discovered the world of internet chat rooms. Jim can't resist the chance to be near her in cyberspace. Spoilers up to Cocktails. Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 18 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 84660 Read Count: 289089 ePub Downloads: 115
[Report This] Published: March 04, 2007 Updated: May 22, 2007
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: March 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Beneath the music from a farther room.
Date: March 26, 2007 Title: Chapter 10: Beneath the music from a farther room.
Jim, Jim, Jim. *sigh* This story is so well done, you've got ME guessing. Does Pam know or not know? Does Vexin know and has she told Pam? What the heck is Jim gonna do for a photo? (I keep picturing him using the fake-photo that comes when you buy a picture frame, LOL, but I could see him using a picture of one of his cousins or something.) And is Pam pushing for one because she wants to see how far Jim will take his lie?
Oh man. This story continues to be awesome, but it's starting to make me really nervous. The tension!
And how many of us looked up the words to the Adam Sandler song? I bet that link got a ton of hits from this chapter! (I looked!)
One small thing: I'm sure someone else has told you that your link to the Lisahoo images isn't a complete web address, so we can't link to it.
More, please!
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: March 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: In the room the women come and go
Date: March 28, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: In the room the women come and go
Oh, MAN! The tension just keeps growing! The chat!sex is SO gonna get Jim in trouble. COME CLEAN, MAN! Eeeeek. But I know he won't. *sigh*
And where's Karen? Hmm...inquiring minds want to know.
Though I must say that Ryan's belief that everyone online are 'freaks and perverts' is one echoed by my husband. That made me giggle.
Jeez! You've crafted a delicious story here. But the wondering is starting to kill me (in a good way, of course, hence the 'delicious' comment.)
Great job, Moxie. Can't wait for more.
Reviewer: lapdogdesign Signed
Date: March 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Streets that follow like a tedious argument
Date: March 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 9: Streets that follow like a tedious argument
Ooh. That Vexin is smart! Jim needs to watch his step around her. And Poor Pam. I wonder what is going on there. It's a shame that this story is from Jim's POV so we're as in the dark about it as he is.
Can't wait to see what happens next!