Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed
Date: March 21, 2007
Title: Chapter 35: Chapter 35 - Pam's best first date
So, so, good. I absolutely loved Jim's fake performance review of Michael. So perfect. How sweet that Pam is now looking at the events of The Client as a date. Aw! But, you DID forget about the show that night. (Was it Threat Level Midnight? Something like that.)
And... I would like to know about what Karen considers her first date with Jim. Was it when she had a drunk Jim in her SUV and totally took advantage of him? Drinks at Coopers after the deadly PLoD discussion of The Merger? Or something in between? Don't keep us in suspense.
I think Klutz is with a "K".
Don't you think every really good daughter should end a telephone conversation with he mom with an "I Love You"? It's only good etiquette for those who bring us into the world.
And, I have 3 kids and am fortunate enough NEVER to have set foot in a Chuck E. Cheese. Life is kind to me.
"Have your tried turning the volume down?" reminds me of that line (maybe from a deleted scene) about ring tones "you mean, vibrate?" Love that - so perfect.
Thanks for more girly-girl, Muggins. You know I love girl-talk.
Author's Response: I didn't forget the SHOW but since Pam wasn't ALONE with him, I figured she didn't count it. Plus I needed to trim my word count. ;)
Karen's first date with Jim....is something I don't want to think about...either Drunk!Jim! in SUV or at Cooper's. Not much humor in either scenario for me. They actually make me a little sick because both would have been AWKWARD motivationally. Plus, I still want to disbelieve that Jim and Karen are really dating. I have a very resilient willpower in that respect.
Klutz is ABSOLUTELY spelled with a 'K'. I should have clarified that Jim wanted Michael to have a mispelled word tattoed on his forehead.
Life IS very kind to you. Chuck E. Cheese is INSANE. I could not imagine Stanley going there in a million years. That's why I sat giggling while writing I was writing it. I think he would stay in the car.
Dang it! You are so right about ending that phone call with an "I love you!" What was I thinking!!! Crapola. Another JAM opportunity missed. Shoot.