Penname: grapenutbeats Real name:
Member Since: February 28, 2007

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Busted by Teresa Rated: K [Reviews - 3] 1
Summary: Maybe how it finally happens between Pam and Jim is simple and quick, even hardly noticable to others.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 848 Read Count: 2447 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: March 30, 2007 Updated: March 30, 2007
Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed 9
Date: March 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Busted

I really like the concept of this story (it happening so subtly just like so much of their relationship).  You might want to work on formatting, though.

Author's Response: By formatting I'm assuming you mean what the next reviewer was talking about.  It seems to be difficult to follow who is saying what.  I had a feeling it might be.  I will have to work on that.  Thanks.

A Glimpse by Smurfette729 Rated: K+ [Reviews - 110] 34
Summary: Past Featured StoryPam gets a taste of what her life could be like. AU
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam, Pam/Roy
Genres: Dream/Fantasy, Married
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11596 Read Count: 55327 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: June 12, 2007 Updated: September 21, 2007
Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed 10
Date: June 12, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I liiiiike!  Nice concept; I like to see this done well.  Get the next part up soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm working on the next part.

Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed 10
Date: June 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

I totally, totally love iiiiit!  Please continue!  And try not to get too cheesy/schmaltzy, as these stories often tend to get ;)

Author's Response: Thanks! (And I'll try not to get too schmaltzy).

If I fall from New York City by Stablergirl Rated: K [Reviews - 8] 4
Summary: If Jim Halpert were a poet and had written down his thoughts on his drive from NYC back to Scranton, PA... These might be them.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam
Genres: Poetry
Warnings: No Warnings Apply
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 396 Read Count: 2160 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2007 Updated: June 13, 2007
Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed
Date: June 13, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: The Pulse of my Existence

Good effort...


Author's Response: thanks...

For what I am when I am with you... by Stablergirl Rated: M [Reviews - 253] 108
Summary: Past Featured Story

“I need someplace to stay.” She said this so softly he had to strain to hear her in the stillness of the evening, leaning toward her slightly.  Something inside of him suddenly wanted to protect her.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim, Jim/Pam, Pam
Genres: Angst, Inner Monologue, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 33558 Read Count: 126535 ePub Downloads: 51
[Report This] Published: June 14, 2007 Updated: July 24, 2007
Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed 9
Date: July 04, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Delicate and Fragile

Please please update again soon.  This concept is fantastic.  Why aren't there more fics with this premise?  It's cute and great and I love it.  I'm not a fan of all the poetry-ish stuff, though.  I generally have a tendency to think anything poetry or "artsy" I guess or anything like that has no place in fanfiction.  I've never read it where it works.  Since the rest of this is so enjoyable, I don't have too much of a problem with it, but I think it's unnecessary and in fact detrimental to the quality of the story.  Just a suggestion!

Author's Response: yeah I know some people don't feel the poetry vibe.  Luckily for you guys you can totally skip it/ignore it and you won't lose plot!  Lol just take it with a grain, it's just something that I'm exploring.  Thanks for the feedback and for reading!!!! Please keep me posted on how you like the rest.

Observer Effect by GodInThisChilis Rated: M [Reviews - 409] 151
Summary: Past Featured Story

MEMBER'S CHOICE TOP NOMINEE - Jim and Pam must interact in network sponsored live chats to promote their documentary. Angst (and maybe some smut) ensue.

Story now complete.

 


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Pam/Other
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: Reality Reality TV
Chapters: 23 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 51174 Read Count: 147882 ePub Downloads: 49
[Report This] Published: October 11, 2007 Updated: November 16, 2007
Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed 10
Date: October 23, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: TTYL

I just started this story and I have to say, I love all of it!  I'm on the edge of my seat!

Reviewer: grapenutbeats Signed
Date: October 24, 2007 Title: Chapter 11: ETA

I also noticed the emails were the same (and saw you fixed it), but theoretically Jim wouldn't mind using his gmail with Pam because he doesn't know Pam is SweaterGirl, right?  But I'll forgive the lapse in realism for the sake of the story :)

Author's Response: That is very true, but I don't want Pam to figure things out...yet :)