Response to the Injury Challenge.
10 Ah, you really can't go wrong with Dr. Jim. So sweet. The idea of him just dousing peroxide though? Made me recoil in pain!
Author's Response: I know, that peroxide thing kind of made my hand hurt as I was typing it. Thanks for the review!
9 I reread this story today, and I still just enjoy it so much. It is a great scene and the interaction between the two of them is perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you like it so much!
Jim and Pam and snow. 10 I loved, loved, loved this. So sad, but still wonderful.
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 That was beautifully sad. Well done. I certainly hope you write some more! :)
Pam has had enough. She traps Jim in the supply closet with her.
8 I'm glad the muse struck like that! That was lovely. I kind of wished you made it even longer, and expanded the dialogue because I didn't quite want the moment between them to end! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks! You know, I love my muse, I really do. But if it doesn't let me get some sleep, I'm gonna kick it to the curb!
I would have liked to have done some more dialoge and stuff, but I just am not very good at writing it. So I try to stay away a bit.
Could be kinda in response to The Injury challenge. Jim suddenly has a lot of time to contemplate and reminisce. I really like this story. Chapter 2 pretty much confirmed what I thought was going on (hee.), but I'm still kind of nervous. Poor Jim all angsty, sitting in the waiting room.
Author's Response:
Hee. I know. Don't you want to just sit next to him and hold his hand.
Poor Jim. Today just isn't his day....
10 Man, I hadn't thought of that game in such a long time. We used to play it with those pieces of papers folded like a flower or a duck's bill. Good times.
I'm happy to hear Pam will pull through. You had me worried there for a while.
I know!! But it totally seemed like a game they'd play.
Me too. I was afraid I was getting too soap opera-y already so I wouldn't ever take it further. Pam will be OK. :)
10 The flirting certainly balanced out the angst a little bit. This story is really keeping me on the edge of my seat. Thanks for the regular updates though!
Author's Response: You are welcome. I figured it'd be too depressing the other way around. LOL!
10 Ah, these two crazy kids! This was my favourite chapter so far. I love it when they are playful with each other. I'm glad mom and daughter are doing well.
I had a rotten day so this was an extra special treat to come home to. I'm happy you are busy with conference calls. ;)
Crazy indeed. I'm fond of playful Jam myself.
And yes. Rest assured. Pam and whatshername ;) are doing just fine.
Glad I could give you a treat!!
9 Awww. What a lovely family. :)
Author's Response: Aren't they adorable? I can't even take it myself.
9 Awwww. This was so sweet. I really don't think you stepped into cheesy territory at all. It was just very heartfelt. Jim loves his girls and that is alright with me.
Author's Response:
Alrighty then. No cheese. Good to know. It's that interview about the babies casting. I can't get it out of my mind. This does not bode well for me keeping Pam from getting knocked up in my fics I'll have you know. LOL!
You are a writing machine, my dear. I can't wait to see where this leads!
Author's Response: Apparently that is the case. Knowing me you won't have to wait long to find out. LOL!
9 I am a bit overwhelmed by the angst, and had an urge to shake Pam. Very good story, if terribly sad.
7 Ah Michael! As inappropriate as always. I thought you were able to portray him well.
Cute story. Two tiny things... I think you meant Meredith, and not Margaret, when you were talking about cocktails. She is certainly the resident boozer! Hee.
I'm also a bit curious how Jim got hold of ice all of a sudden. Were they in the break room at that point? I couldn't quite figure it out...
*facepalm*
Believe it or not, I did have it checked over. I also wrote it on an airplane on an overnight flight. Thanks for pointing out the mistake! As for Jim/Pam, I imagined they were still in the lunch room after everyone else had left. Sorry if it wasn't clear. I'll definitely make sure to keep this in mind if I ever write again. Thanks for the review.
7 Good way of filling in the blanks. I could really see a situation like this having pushed Jim to the wall to complain about Pam.
Its 2036. Pam reflects back on the last 30 years.
8 When she sees him in the meeting after all this time, a little squee came out of me. Hee. Interesting take on what Pam and Jim's life might be down the road.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that scene. I was tempted to make it more dramatic. Then I decided that these two had already experienced enough drama, so it became more sappy.
9 Yay for Gil! I'm glad he has a fixation on Jim's hair (don't we all ;)) & that he gives some great advice.
Author's Response: Thanks! We all need a Gil to point us the right way, don't we?
Pam learns a new skill from Jim.
8 Mmmm, teaching Jim. Sweet, sweet tension. I second that request for a sequel. Pam could teach him something this time. And if it leads to them making out, so be it. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, Morning Angel :) I sense a series...
MEMBER'S CHOICE - What if Roy's announcement on the booze cruise was just a few minutes later?8 Oooo, I liked it. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks!
9 That was just such a lovely alternate scenario for Booze Cruise. Loved it. I do hope you continue the story in this universe.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm considering a continuation.
Jim is in Stamford. Pam is in Scranton. Can a long distance realationship work? Part of Jam Sessions.
9 Ah, I still like this story so much. Very sweet. Now, I have to go read their date in New York. :)
9 That was very funny, and befitting of the JK Hussies. ;)
Jim sees a therapist. Starts in the midst of season two. So glad you updated this. I lvoe this story. Poor sad Jim. Everything leading up to Casino Night is so heartwrenching for him.
10 I love this. And I'm glad to have Jim working through all of this because he is so sensitive and shouldn't get broken down by a girl, no matter how wonderful she is.
9 I could really see Jim trying to resist this whole endeavour, because it brings everything he has tried not to deal with for so long. I do hope he will finally start to see the light a little bit in the end though. :)