Pam moved to New York instead of starting work at Dunder Mifflin. Years later she returns and she meets Jim, but they're at very different points in their lives.Hooray for this great story! Thanks a bunch. Can't wait for it to continue.
Jim and Pam are Jim and Pam, only...not really.Imagine Jim’s confession on Casino Night never happened and Pam actually made it down the aisle on June 10th . . . only to say “I don’t”.Way to go, Jim. Be. Assertive. Be. Be. Assertive. In your absence you will allow for Pam to grow all Fancy and New.
THis is a great great story. You had me hooked from chapter 1 and I've just read the whole thing on my break. I love it.
Excellent choice, Jim. I think this is exactly what Jim should do. Whether or not it is what he will do, well, that remains to be seen, er, read. I hope he goes. That's my vote.
Author's Response: Oh, he\'s goin\'! ;-) Thanks for your vote (and your review)!
Lol. The wisdom of the penis. Often when men 'listen to their penis' it offers them the wrong advice. I like how you turned the tables on that old cliche. Nice chapter. I'm following this one very closely.
Good chapter. Good for you for painting Roy in a kind light. He deserves it in this story. Very well done.
Wow. This story just keeps getting better. And not one but two smutty chapters. Delicious. Thanks for this!
I’ve been a competent, hard-driving business woman. Now I’m a crazy girlfriend who tapes sex and then critiques my partner afterward. Plus I got a boob job to win back a guy. It’s way too late for Too Late Kev to write “out of character” for me; the writers have already done that.
You've broken the 4th wall...with the truth!!! Nice story.
Ha! There are a few other Bad!Fics that have broken the 4th wall, too. Somehow, it only works with Bad!Fic. I may always remember this one from Maybe Once: "It was pretty sticky, but for some reason it only seems gross to you, the reader." I remember laughing out loud at that.
Thanks for reading and reviewing, Daoust! :)
Pam disappears one day in August.
Post-S2 AU, if Pam had decided not to stay in Scranton.
Hey, neat story here. I felt you could have drawn this one chapter out into a couple chapters. You're writing is so descriptive and poetic, and I just loved your little vignettes. But I wanted more. More details. More story. You've got a gift here. Thanks for writing this.
Nice little story, Everybody. Well written. Was this episode supposed to have been in November?
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, Daoust. I wrote November simply because I assumed it was a follow up episode to The Deposition. Probably anytime in the early winter would have worked. :)
The folks over at NorthernAttack and myself are truly loving this story! It's pretty freaking fantastic. This story is so not anything like my teenage/ early twenties years.
Author's Response: Elly had to explain to me what northern attack is... As a first time fan fiction writer that is just so cool!\r\n\r\nCan I ask what criticisms you all may have? I really don\'t know what is acceptable, etc. I only know what I like and hope some other people will as well \r\n\r\nThank you!
After reading this great fanfic, I'm both grateful and a little hot and bothered. Nice work.
Author's Response: Haha--grateful and hot and bothered--I\'ll take it! Thanks!
I like what you did here. I think you could have carried it out even further, dug deeper into Pam's psyche, you know. Good effort.
Neat story. Not many people love the religious themed fanfics, but I get them, and appreciate them. Well done.
Just a little introspection. I guess mild spoilers for Season 4 and the general concept of where things might be going for Jim and Pam.Holla. Very well written. A nice read.
Author's Response: Ha-holla! Thanks so much for reading! I\'m glad you enjoyed it!
girl7, you are such a gifted writer. You have such a comfort, such ease with your words. You make it look so easy. Wow. Great job.
Author's Response: Wow -- thank you so much, Daoust! I really appreciate your always taking the time to review, BTW. :o)
Hmm. Almost angsty. Of course we all would want them to say so, so much more to each other. But really, what could they say. Your story is probably very true to the characters, and the situation. This could be a good challenge.
Pam married Roy and moved to California after "Casino Night," and Jim gave up. But then he started getting the letters...Ahhhh! This chapter is soooo great! I loved it! Very well done. This story makes me very happy!
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I\'m really happy people are enjoying reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.
Don't you dare give up on this story. It has all the makings of a great fanfic. You have Michael down to a tee. T? Tea? Whatever, you write him well. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: Thanks! Michael is always a challenge and I have to really think about his \"voice,\" so I\'m glad to hear you think I have him down to a tee/T/tea. :) Thanks for reviewing.
This is a really great idea for a fanfic, carbondalien. Of course, it's all about the writing, and you are clearly great at what you do. Keep up the good work. Jim totally writes letters like guys would. You could tell that Jim was trying not to say too much, or reveal too much in that first letter. He didn't want to put his heart on his sleeve for fear of outing himself emotionally. I liked that touch. Well done.
A little bit of plot development, and a little bit of Jammy goodness. All good ingredients in a fanfic chapter.
Author's Response: Why thank you very much. There will be more Jammy goodness coming soon. And, hopefully, plot development. :p
I have been noticing the graduation from the two of them simply signing their names at the end of the letters to 'with love' and now 'love'. Also, how much they miss each other is becoming more and more evident with each letter. Jim is so going to California with this week of vacation time. I know it!
Author's Response: The \'with love\' to \'love\' transition was something I was hoping people would pick up on. Yay. :)
What a loaded last line to this chapter!!! Brilliant!
Author's Response: Plenty more loaded lines to come. Impossible for there not to be with these two.
It felt like a victory because he knows what it means! Good chapter. I was unsure of where you were going with Maddie's story in the last chapter, and now it is all becoming clearer. I'm a little slow, like Kevin. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
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