Pam married Roy and moved to California after "Casino Night," and Jim gave up. But then he started getting the letters...Oooh! Angst. Nice. I'm afraid to write angst in my story because I'm afraid I won't do it well. Great great job.
Also, I loved "Lofty". That made me laugh!
Lisahoo is right! Extra points for that sweet Charlie Brown reference! You can just feel the tension mounting in this story. I can't wait for the volcano of emotions to erupt!!!
Author's Response: The volcano blows its top eventually. And, if I may say so (and I may be biased), I think it\'s a pretty big explosion. I hope so anyway! :)
The excellence continues. You were sure right about there being a whole lot of loaded lines. I especially liked the one about getting her feet wet, and not wanting to go all in...the ocean.
I can't wait for more.
Wow. Great couple of chapters added since I last checked. I'm not even suspicious of the Abby/Karen character. Should I be? You wrote her very well. She's very likeable.
Author's Response: She\'s not a threat. Jim and Pam themselves are obstacle enough.
I like Abby. She's smart. Jim, on the other hand...
These are some rapid fire chapters. Good work, Carbo.
Instead of Jan with no Gould, it's Pam with no gold. Yay!!! Great job. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. :)
This is a good story. I really like it. For me, you could have totally wrapped it up at the end of the last chapter and I would have been very happy. Nevertheless, I'm sticking through to the end with this one. Great work!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
This was my first large-scale JAM fic, although it shorn't be my last. I have plenty of ideas. Plenty
Best news I've heard all day!!! This was a great story. I can't wait to hear from you again! Thanks for a great story!!!
This is a very very good story. You have such a wonderful balance of sweet, and romantic and sexual. Thank you for writing this.
This is like Y Tu Mama Tabien: Office Edition. Wow. Wow.
Author's Response: Heeee. People just have threesomes in Latin America! Thanks for reading!
Wow. Talk about a cliff hanger. Is there not more to this?
This is a great story. You could have cut it into smaller chapters and drawn it out more. But I know lots of people like reading it all at once. It's a great great fanfic though. Thanks for writing it.
Roy dies, Dunder-Mifflin goes under, and Pam becomes a drug dealer. An AU that begins in late Season 2.
Inspired by the show "Weeds."
The AU's are just flying since the summer started. I'm a big fan of Weeds, so I'm gonna keep an eye on this one. Great, if a little out there, start.
Author's Response: Thank you! It is kind of an out-there story, but hopefully an enjoyable one :)
Methinks the author has a bit of personal experience adding some touches and insight to this story. Am I wrong?
Author's Response: Hahaha, um - I admit to nothing? :)
Pam needs to learn about contraceptives. She isn't in sub Saharan Africa, for Thor's sake. haha. Good try.
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