Jim asks Pam out after his return from NYC. Will it be the perfect first date or will their nerves get the best of them?
I know what I want; MORE MORE MORE!!! You really left us hanging there! This is a great chapter. I say keep going! Please!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review and input! I did leave it a little open ended. So, thanks for letting me know what you thought! Oh, and thanks for being consistent and faithful in your comments and reading! You're great!
Good chapter. I'm glad you picked this story up again. Excellent.
Three years have passed since Pam left Scranton for New York, and Jim is still very much on her mind. Will a work-related trip to Rome, Italy be the catalyst that reunites Pam with Jim once and for all?
Hey. Someone in NorthernAttack recommended that we read your story here, and tonight I did. Wow. This is a great read. I read the whole thing in one sitting, and loved every chapter. Thanks for writing this.
Author's Response: Wow! I'm quite flattered. Thank you for cruising over here and taking a chance on my story- I really appreciate that. I'm so excited to hear that you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing.
26 Begun out of hiatus frustration as an exploration of what we might miss of Jim and Pam's newfound romance, this has grown into something unique and cool, a multi-authored exercise in creativity and obsession.
By the way, we talk about it here if you're interested in saying hi.
Hello? Where are the NA'ers singing this stories praises? This story rocks my socks. I promise to contribute to it, someday. But so far, so great. Keep it up. NorthernAttack represent!!!
(I feel the need to clarify that I'm not gay, after that post.)
Hibbity dibbity, here we COME!!! Great chapter!
Wow. Smutalicious. Well done.
Fantastic effort, Brian!!! This is my favourite chapter of them all so far. Although that smutty chapter was pretty great too.
Great work NA'ers. You all make me so proud to be a part of it.
Holy hot stuff! That was a fantastic fanfic chapter. This little story is developing very well, methinks. Go NA!
I don't care if everyone thinks I'm geeky for reviewing this story here and on NA. I am what I am. That's Popeye.
I loved this chapter, VB. You've done a great job here. I loved this chapter.
This was awesome! What a great chapter. Amazing set up for chapter 17, whoever has it. Also great tie up of the previous chapters.
This is unbelievably well written. I actually want to have sex with this story. That's how good it is. I'd enjoy it. The story would say "eh, I've had better."
Hoooooooooooly crap this is great! This chapter flowed like....(searching for similie) hot fudge on a Dairy Queen sundae. It was sweet to the taste and I didn't mind when it got all over my face... Um. That totally takes away from what I wanted to say about this chapter, which is that I absolutely LOVED IT. The humanity and the reality you gave to the characters was just awesome.
Also...giving Jim's brothers the names Brian and Nathan...nice nod to NA. Maybe they have a pet goldfish named Daoust???
Again, great work! Fabulous.
Thanks, Daoust! This one was a LOT harder than the first chapter. I really struggled with it and was worried that it might be a little boring.
Thanks for noticing my little NA shout out! Nope, no goldfish though. I'm pretty sure Daoust is Amanda's hamster.
wow. Angsty. Who's in charge of steering this ship back into boinkenberry jamlike waters?
Ahhhh make up sex. The cure for all life's ills.
Ha ha. This is great. Angela and Dwight sound a little too militant for my tastes, but still, the chapter works very well. Is someone going to continue the date? It can't be over yet. I want them to go roller skating and then have Jim and Pam trick them into going to a burlesque show or raunchy night club...
Author's Response:
Hey Daoust, Post-it Thief here. I *think* I'm next in line and I most certainly want to keep going with it. I'll keep your suggestion in mind!
Really lovely chapter. A nice read. Thanks.
Hmm....how to put this? At the end of Season 3, Jim asked Pam out on a date. I thought I might go out on a limb and fill in the blanks.... (SERIOUS FLUFF ALERT!)
You already have him, she told herself. He came back from New York because of you. There is nothing to prove tonight. She wished she could believe it.
Another excellent chapter, Mox. Really enjoyable read.
Ha ha. Stupid Jim! Screw first, ask questions later!!! Great story so far, and great chapter. You are a master, Moxie.
Great. Now I've got a hard on at work. Thanks a lot.
Author's Response:
HEY! You were warned, mister! ;-)
Glad to be of assistance. :-D
Oh man!!! What a great chapter!!! That's the perfect cliff hanger ending too. I am really enjoying this story! Great job!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much Daoust! I'm having too much fun writing. More will be coming soon! TWSS...
I really like this story, Questionizer. Especially that line in the last chapter about Pam kissed Jim, then Jim kissed Pam, and then they finally kissed each other. That was great. Keep this one going!!!
Author's Response: Thanks Daoust! I have so much more that this may go down as the longest date on record!
Sometimes it takes support from an unlikely source to help you through your darkest hours.
Now Complete!
It's really interesting thinking of these two together. I think you're doing an excellent job. Keep it up. TWSS.
Author's Response: Thanks for the comment! I really appreciate it!
Hey. This is really neat. A really cool angle. Keep it up! I'll be reading it.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Thanks for the comment!
What would have happened if Jim had been a little later getting back to the office?
What the fudge? You told me it wasn't Pam. At least...but...I'm confused...
Author's Response: Sorry i was sneaky...Pam is Pam, and Jenny is Jenny, it just happened that someone screwed up in telling them apart.