Wow, I really really love this fic, it's written wonderfully and captures the characters perfect. I think when watching the show I am looking for someone to blame for all of this, whether it be Pam, Jim, Karen, or Roy, but in this fic you've layed it all out so well it really hit me how no one is to blame for all of this, they've all made acceptable mistakes, and all of them are suffering the consequences just because no one can speak their mind and talk about it, which is so real. There is nothing worse than reading a fic that is out of character, but you have managed to nail everything, can't wait to read the last chapter. (And it so sounds like Dwight at the door =P)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love the way that you put it-- "all of them are suffering the consequences just because no one can speak their mind and talk about it." So true. And as for the next chapter... I'm not telling!

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Really beautifully written, and I can't wait to see this episode to see all that happens, I'm ready for this thing to reach it's climax just so we can get to the other side, and hopefully that will be with these two finally together!

I loved the melancholy and description of this piece, it wasn't overly done, just the right amount to make a beautiful story, fantastic job.