I like this concept so far.  I look forward to your story!

I was hoping we could skip the part where Pam backslides with Roy.  Hopefully Jim and her will work it out soon.  Enjoying this.

I really like this one so far.  I hope you countinue soon.

It was all I could do to read this in one sitting.  My dad spent a lot of time in the hospital before he passed away.  I know it's every parents nightmare to know they won't be there for their children regardless of how old they are.  You did such a beautiful job of letting Pam's story play out in a way to comfort Jim.    My vote on the laptop to Hawaii is neither, you do what you want.  It's such a beautiful place to just go and relax.  Your creative juices are bound to flow either way.  Have a wonderful trip and thanks for the quick update.

I read your note at MTT and have to apologize for not reviewing your latest chapter.  As always it's another gem.  I am very anxious for Jim and Pam to talk.  Even though I'm afraid when they do it may be the end.  I'm sad thinking Pam doesn't know that Jim has figured it out.  Thanks again for a wonderful job.

Author's Response:

Thanks, KH.  I was feeling a bit neurotic about the lack of reviews.  I like things when I post 'em but then, if there's very little feedback, I start to second-guess myself and think, "Well, maybe not enough happened." or that I've bored the pants off everyone, readers are finally losing interest ... my mind goes through all kinds of scenarios, none of them any fun.

The story won't end as soon as Pam and Jim talk.  I've got a few more chapters in me.

Thanks a lot for taking the time to leave a note.  I appreciate it.

I am happy to keep you living witha review.  I don't really have anything worthy to say to how great this was.  So intimate without words.  Thank you once again for a masterpiece.

Author's Response: Thanks, kh.  I'm kinda blushing.  More soon.  I hope you like the next one, as well as this one.  I'm enjoying writing it.

First off I sqealed with delight when I saw you had updated.  I was just thinking about this story yesterday.  I wanted to beg you for an update but didn't want to bother!  I loved your scene with Larrisa.  The same thing happened with my dad.  It was very scary to watch.  They had to tie him down.  I love everything about this story actually.  I know you have struggled finishing this but I hope you know you are a talented writer and should keep going.  I'm willing to wait as long as it takes.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your REALLY kind words.  I can't believe how nice people are about the incredibly long time it takes me to post these chapters recently. 

And, yeah, it really is scary to watch a family member go through this.  Poor Larissa isn't done yet, either!

I can't tell you how happy I am when I see an update.  This was such a sweet Mother/Son chapter.  I love how they were able to talk and Jim was there for her.  On a side note, have a great visit with your son.

Author's Response:

Thanks, kh!  I may not know how happy you are to see an update but I can tell you I'm very happy to see your reviews!  I'm glad you liked the interaction between Jim & Larissa.

I surely am looking forward to my visit with Young Blood!  Eleven days together!  It's gonna be great!

I have a huge grin on my face because you have updated this story.  I loved seeing them have a moment before going back to the grind.  Thank you so much.

Author's Response: Thanks so much!  I'm glad you liked it!

Even though I knew another update was coming I was SO excited to see this.  Loved Larissa's cautious attitude about Pam.  Very realistic for a mom.  I know the JAM interaction is coming and I can't wait, but I too am loving the other relationship storylines.

Author's Response: Thanks!  I've got to get back to work now.  I'm hoping to write part of the next chapter tomorrow.

That was a powerful chapter.  My Dad was in the hospital alot hooked up to many machines so I can empathize with them.  Great job!

Author's Response: Thanks very much!  It means a lot when people who've been through similar situations say it rings true.

I loved your flashback.  My husband traveled to Australia many years ago and still likes to throw out a slang now and then.  My heart breaks for both of them.  I hope through all of this they can really talk things out.  I can't tell you how happy I am whenever I see you have updated.  This is the best story out there!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, khand3stooges!  This is the best story out there!  Now you're making me blush!

I'm glad to see you liked the flashback.  I've often wondered how Jim would've spent that day.  Not getting much feedback on this chapter, so maybe it didn't work for most as well as I'd hoped.  I'm glad it worked for you!