Penname: comiskey Real name:
Member Since: April 22, 2007

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Liquid Courage by bnbrice Rated: M [Reviews - 28] 8
Summary: Jim and Pam picking up right after Back from Vacation
Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Karen, Jim/Pam, Michael, Pam, Ryan
Genres: Angst, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10554 Read Count: 18935 ePub Downloads: 6
[Report This] Published: June 28, 2007 Updated: February 06, 2008
Reviewer: comiskey Signed
Date: July 14, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Really great story do far.  I look forward to reading what happens next.

Summary:

While experiencing writer's block for "Grow a Pair," I thought, "what about the other moments when Pam could have "made things right" so to speak?  There were plenty of times in Season 2, but for the sake of my ADD, I will limit myself to Season 3 so I won't get bored and never finish. 

Basically, each chapter (or series of chapters, when stated) is a brief "what if" of episodes in S3 when Pam could've been bolder and made things right with Jim, or when Jim could've made one different choice, and kept things "open" with Pam.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Episode Related
Characters: Ensemble
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Humor, In Stamford, Workdays
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 9297 Read Count: 25904 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: July 15, 2007 Updated: August 04, 2007
Reviewer: comiskey Signed
Date: July 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: A Benihana Christmas

Yay for Pam calling Jim out on not having fun with her anymore.

Reviewer: comiskey Signed
Date: July 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Diwali

"No, it was dancing."

 Aww!  So cute!  I love all of these what if scenarios that you're creating. 

Talk by Annabel Winslow Rated: M [Reviews - 171] 72
Summary: Past Featured StoryJim and Pam and two telephones, post-Season 3.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8370 Read Count: 59167 ePub Downloads: 14
[Report This] Published: July 16, 2007 Updated: August 02, 2007
Reviewer: comiskey Signed
Date: July 18, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: Proximity

I'm really liking this fic.  The banter is cute and sexy all at the same time :)

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you think so, comiskey!

Scrabble by Stablergirl Rated: M [Reviews - 101] 35
Summary: Jim and Pam play Scrabble during a thunder storm.  Nuff said? Nuff said.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Fluff, Humor, Romance
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14137 Read Count: 37228 ePub Downloads: 7
[Report This] Published: July 28, 2007 Updated: August 30, 2007
Reviewer: comiskey Signed
Date: August 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 1: An opportune moment

I absolutely love this so far.  Jim's insecurities and unspoken words causing missed moments that just sort of stretch out until he's not sure what to do...that's so right on.  Also great cliffhanger with the power going out.


Author's Response:

thank you!!! lol yeah I love that ending with the power.  am I allowed to say that about my own chapter? ;-)

Reviewer: comiskey Signed
Date: August 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 2: Since you're here, and since the power's out...

Lovely.  I liked how Pam was so calm and confident in this chapter and just telling Jim that things work themselves out.  Also I laughed when she called him out on the Scrabble ploy.  That was great.


Author's Response: glad you laughed at that one ;-)

Reviewer: comiskey Signed
Date: August 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 3: To each his own

Cute chapter.  And can I just say how I love that they're talking about (or rather skirting around) important stuff while playing Scrabble?  Because it's great.

Author's Response: thanks thanks. 

Reviewer: comiskey Signed
Date: August 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 4: No apologies.

Aw, amazing chapter.  I love the way it transitioned from the game (with Jim making the word want) to the two of them actually going for what they want - each other.  Plus, the stars on the ceiling is really cute.


Author's Response: ugh yes.  jim spelling the word want, so hot of him.

Reviewer: comiskey Signed
Date: August 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 5: If the hell that is Dunder Mifflin hadn't intervened...

I'm glad they're talking and learning to trust each other again.

Reviewer: comiskey Signed
Date: August 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 6: What was I saying?

This chapter was really sexy and hot.  And so Jim and Pam (or at least how I imagine they'd be in this sort of situation) to go from arguing about bagel bites to having an amazing make-out session.

Reviewer: comiskey Signed
Date: August 30, 2007 Title: Chapter 7: Be black in April, Phyllis, ok?

That was a totally sweet day after complete with ensemble amusement.  Great job.


Author's Response: thank you so much for your reviews!!!!!!! You made my night.  And I'm so glad you liked this chapter.