Reviewer: bealsa Signed
Date: June 17, 2007
Title: Chapter 1: How Not To Save A Life
Great ensemble piece. You got every character down great. I loved that Michael really did hit Ryan, so funny. And Dwight thinking he can do better than the instructor, hah!
The one thing that would have been better is if you let Pam and Jim stay partners and they did some serious mouth-to-mouth exercises :) Oh! What about one more chapter where they practice together!
But on a personal note, yay for volunteering for the Red Cross! I'm sure you're helping to save lots of lives, and this story reminded me that my certification is almost up, so thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks. It was my first (and still only really) ensemble piece. Thankfully, my class today was no where near as bad as it would have been at DM.. yes, that is really a nightmare in the making.
I was toying with the idea of Jim and Pam still being able to be partners... but, I also know that really we aren't allowed to let that happen unless necessary, and my prompt was more for a non-JAM session. So, I figured, I would keep it in tune with season two and just light flirtation.... but, yes... I will say, practicing concious choking - incredibly sweet and romantic. I love being the choking person when I am teaching with my crush (oh yeah, he can abdominal thrust me any time :P)
Totally get your certification renewed. I could teach you... exept, that would mean you would have to live in the same general area as me. Red Cross is my passion - a love hate relationship we have. I love them, but when they take up all my time... it takes me from my true love (office, of course)