Oh, come on, Pam! Be truthful! Take some chances!  :)

I'm loving it all! 

Nice chapter! It was really weird to read about them kind of "life after DM", but you did it really well. I had to stop and think about just how weird it would be for Pam, and for all of them, to come back for one last interview, hoping not to see Michael's car there and stuff. I don't know, that part just got me.

And I thought you wrote Roy very well. You got the awkwardness, but it was also the little things, like Roy and Pam starting to speak at the same time, Roy getting up when Jim walked in...things like that.

Looking forward to more! 

What a cute story. Loved Kevin's list and great job writing Kelly. Loved it!


Author's Response: Thank you! Kelly is definitely my favorite person to write! Perhaps because I am a young blonde girl who loves celebrity gossip and finds myself talking like that occasionally.... (wow I think I just overshared) ;) Glad you enjoyed it!

I really enjoyed this story. I've always liked the idea that Pam would paint Jim, and I loved Jim with the wine. Very funny and cute. Good job!

You really did great with all of the olden day speak, keeping it going through out the entire piece. These characters are perfect, too. Everyone was perfect!

Author's Response: Lol...I loves me ye olde tymes.  Thank you for reading!

Oh, I like this idea. And you're very descriptive, which I like. The first paragraph made me want to go back to bed. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Author's Response: Thank you. I've always had a problem with telling rather than showing, which is a big no-no, so I think I'm over compensating. I'm glad you're enjoying it!

Okay, I hope this turns into more than just "a glimpse". Her life is so much better with Jim. Let's see how she deals with the kids and everything at the game!

I like how you made Pam really hesitant and weary of getting involved with the kids. I think that when she had the children her mothering instincts kicked in and she's a great mom, but if she doesn't remember having them then I think she'd be acting how she is here. If that makes sense...so great job! 

I kinda hate Jim for not officially ending things with Karen first, but I feel bad for the guy so I'll give 'em a break :) And cliffhangers are the reason I hate/love reading WIPs so post more soon. I need to know what happens next!

Author's Response:

Cliffhangers are kind of evil, aren't they. But more will be up very soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing! I hope you enjoy the rest.

You are breaking my heart. Good for Pam though. I hope she's been working on her art! 

This is really interesting. I think you did a good job with the character traits. The changes are good, stays true to both characters. And I agree, Ryan is definitely more business-like. I'm curious as to what direction you're going to take the characters so keep writing!

No buffer here. This is a great idea. So is smut! Keep it going!

Oh, Ryan, you tricky devil.

Good job with the chat scene!

What a great idea! I have a traumatic story of a bully and a teacher who wouldn't listen to me, so I'm really feeling Pam on this one :)

Author's Response: Adults are just mean when they don't listen. I know, I am probably guilty of this. I mean, just yesterday, C was crying in the car, saying J hit her, J said he barely touched her. I just told them to behave, because I was driving. So, who knows, I could have scared C for life.