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Later by girl7 Rated: M [Reviews - 48] 45
Summary: A little darkness on this Tuesday morning....sorry.  I'll make it better later. Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam, Michael
Genres: Angst, In Stamford, Inner Monologue, Romance, Steamy
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 23899 Read Count: 18684 ePub Downloads: 13
[Report This] Published: September 19, 2006 Updated: September 28, 2006
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Date: September 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Thank you, thank you, thank you! I feared Pam wouldn't come around but knowing you, I knew she would. We'll see what really happens tonight, eh?

Summary: Past Featured StoryPost-"Gay Witch Hunt"; Pam's growing up and realizing that if you want something, sometimes you have to fight for it.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related, Alternate Universe
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 128465 Read Count: 418535 ePub Downloads: 127
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2006 Updated: September 23, 2007
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Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I have hope from the title that Pam will actually "learn" something because she's still very skilled at being vague. Go get that boy Ms. Beesley!

Author's Response: Yes, I hope she learned a bit from the last few months of being on her own.  She may just turn her 'vague' skills to her advantage as well.  :-)

Reviewer: Par5 Signed
Date: October 05, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

....and then what happened???? Seriously, this felt very realistic with their having a hard time (TWSS) saying goodbye. Update soon!

Author's Response: Patience, dear!  There's nothing but good stuff coming...

Reviewer: Par5 Signed
Date: October 15, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Hey Wendy? B'bye! See you later sweetheart! Hee! Another great chapter, my dear.

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Date: October 20, 2006 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

Moxie that was such a freaking adorable chapter! I loved the teasing and this line She shook her head sadly. "There's just no hope for you, is there?" made me smile. Thanks for the Friday morning cheer.

Reviewer: Par5 Signed
Date: October 24, 2006 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Another great chapter Moxie! Pam in the middle of a Halpert boy sandwich? Delish! (Also, I couldn't help but thinking of the movie "Along Came Polly" w/ the many, many pillows in Jon's bedroom!)

Reviewer: Par5 Signed
Date: October 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

No wild threesomes? I can hear the groans out there of disappointed readers! Nice tease - thought we were getting some action and then Jonathan comes home. Lots of great lines, love the banter in this chapter and you already know of my love for "So I Married an Axe Murderer" so I might dare to call this my fave chapter! So far...

Author's Response: Yes, I know - but there some things Jim has decided he will not share anymore.  I suppose we have to respect that.   I'm looking forward to a bit of HotforJim!Pam that's coming...

Reviewer: Par5 Signed
Date: October 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Okay, when I beta I can't say much that you haven't already heard but I wanted to be that all important 208th review! Hee! I'm continuing to love this ride but let's get these kids in the car and to Stamford! Pronto! ;)

Author's Response:

patience, patience - good things come to all who wait, etc.... :-)

 There's nothing to stop them now, except maybe a car breaking down, a freak blizzard in October leaving them stranded, or nuclear bombardment by North Korea.  :-)

Reviewer: Par5 Signed
Date: November 03, 2006 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Glad you're out of the hospital Moxie, and apparently your computer problem is solved! Thanks for the sweet release after 21 chapters of foreplay.

Reviewer: Par5 Signed 9
Date: November 14, 2006 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

Okay, so a scalp massage from Jim? Lovin' in the shower? Sorry - no more coherent words can come from me.... SWEET!

Author's Response: Heh - that's the second time I've put Jim in the shower.  I wonder what the attraction could be... ;-)  Maybe next time they'll go with bubbles in the tub....

Reviewer: Par5 Signed 9
Date: December 06, 2006 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24

Ouch, when you mentioned the copier, I immediately got an image of Jim and Karen at the opening of last week's episode. NO! Fortunately, the image of Jim and Pam on his desk erased the image! Sweet.

Author's Response: It was my way of exorcising the Karen demons out of the copier, so it's free to use for Jam things again....

Summary:

This might turn into something like my Away From the Cameras (in that I'll try to do one for every episode).  This is, of course, assuming that those sneaky writers don't reveal something totally the opposite of the assumptions I'm going on here.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intended.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Dwight, Jim, Jim/Pam, Kelly, Michael
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Mild sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 31727 Read Count: 13608 ePub Downloads: 5
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2006 Updated: October 22, 2006
Reviewer: Par5 Signed 10
Date: September 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Convention - part I

Last week I thought they handled the whole Jim/Pam thing too lightly but last night, the pain and angst were back. And you captured it perfectly. I had an actual pain stab my chest when I read "So sure. So wrong." Ouch! Poor Jim.

Reviewer: Par5 Signed
Date: October 13, 2006 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Coup

All right, last night's episode pissed me off so much

Amen, sister! I almost can convince myself that Jim and Pam are just hiding their love from the camera. But I can't believe he's hiding it from Jonathan as well! Another great chapter.

Time and Space by kieyra Rated: MA [Reviews - 25] 37
Summary: Past Featured StoryA bridge between Casino Night and GWH, with some projection beyond. :) Author does not read spoilers or watch previews. Chapter 1 "M" for language; chapter 2 "MA".
Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Explicit sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8979 Read Count: 11529 ePub Downloads: 4
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2006 Updated: September 25, 2006
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Date: September 25, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Time

Excellent, especially the second chapter. Seems just right that they would talk and kiss and talk and do more and talk and just be together; just be "them".

Author's Response: Thank! Glad you liked it. 

Author's Response:

Wow! Making a typo in a response to feedback is embarrassing!

 :)

No Idea by nqllisi Rated: K [Reviews - 22] 20
Summary: Past Featured StoryJim's past comes back to haunt him in a way he never expected.
Categories: Other, Future
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam
Genres: None
Warnings: None
Challenges: Star-Crossed Lovers
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 238 Read Count: 3637 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2006 Updated: September 25, 2006
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Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

"They're a special brand of crazy". You got that right! But what I loved most of all was the son feeling exactly the same about her as Jim did about Pam. Lovely and haunting.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I figured nothing could sway Jim to help in this situation but calling on a memory that powerful.

Summary:

A night out on the town in Stamford, CT.


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Andy, Jim/Pam
Genres: In Stamford
Warnings: Adult language
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5044 Read Count: 2791 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: September 25, 2006 Updated: September 25, 2006
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Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Great stuff! Are you continuing or may I just fill in the happy ending in my mind?!

Summary: Past Featured Story

But almost. ;)


Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future, Episode Related
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Fluff, Romance
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 602 Read Count: 2919 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2006 Updated: September 26, 2006
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Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Swaying Isn't Dancing

Oh, Master of Jam, I bow to thee. Thank you for the fix!

Author's Response: HA!  Hardly a master - just persistent. ;)  You are most welcome.

Summary:

The children of Halpert and Schrute meet and fall in love as only 5th graders can...


Categories: Jim and Pam, Future
Characters: Angela, Dwight, Jim, Pam
Genres: Childhood, Humor, Married, Romance
Warnings: None
Challenges: Star-Crossed Lovers, Daddy Jim
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5706 Read Count: 12125 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2006 Updated: June 14, 2007
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Date: October 07, 2006 Title: Chapter 2: Angela

This is full of great details! Five Schrute girls -yikes! - mixing arts & crafts, Angela and Dwight and a shotgun wedding, green cargo pants! Very much fun. I look forward to them "hugging it out" later!

Author's Response: Thanks! I love fleshing out with details...I have so many more ideas that I'll never be able to fit anywhere!
Yeah, Dwight and Angela 'hugging it out' would be awesome, you know they will!

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Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Laura

Oooh! Please continue! I have to know what Dwight will do next...

Author's Response:

I'm writing the second chapter right now, with lots of Dwight!

Rain by PuffingNoise Rated: K [Reviews - 8] 9
Summary:

Two weeks after Casino Night, Jim is packing for Australia. Pam pays a visit.


Categories: Present, Jim and Pam
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 652 Read Count: 2865 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2006 Updated: September 26, 2006
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Date: September 26, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Rain

Lovely. Good to see Pam finally determined to do what she wants for a change!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Summary: Just like everything else in Jim's life, it all evens out in the end.
Categories: Other, Present, Episode Related
Characters: Jim
Genres: Angst
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 340 Read Count: 2950 ePub Downloads: 0
[Report This] Published: September 26, 2006 Updated: September 26, 2006
Reviewer: Par5 Signed 10
Date: September 27, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: 10 Things Jim Hates About Stamford

Great list! But number 9 was heartbreaking and number 10 gives me the shivers.

Summary: Past Featured StoryAn Office-based parody of The Princess Bride.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Alternate Universe
Characters: Ensemble, Jim/Pam
Genres: Angst, Dream/Fantasy, Drunk Pam/Jim, Fluff, Humor, In Stamford, Parody, Romance
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11456 Read Count: 28148 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2006 Updated: October 14, 2006
Reviewer: Par5 Signed
Date: September 27, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I must confess, I'm not a huge PB addict. But I am a big fan of true love! Carry on!



Author's Response: Thanks, Par5!  Will do...

Summary: Jim is homesick, but he harbors a secret.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Jim/Pam
Genres: In Stamford, Romance
Warnings: Other Adult Theme
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1098 Read Count: 2542 ePub Downloads: 2
[Report This] Published: September 27, 2006 Updated: September 27, 2006
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Date: September 28, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The letter

Oh, Lis, I agree with xoxoxo. It is a far, far better world we have created here and I love your version! This sounds so like something Pam would say if only she would let go of her fears. Thank you!

Author's Response: You're welcome! I love your enthusiasm. Thanks!

Summary: Jim helps Pam plan her wedding.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present
Characters: Dwight, Jim/Pam, Roy
Genres: Fluff
Warnings: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4016 Read Count: 2631 ePub Downloads: 1
[Report This] Published: September 28, 2006 Updated: September 28, 2006
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Date: September 29, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: The Pink Wedding Planner

I liked it and the reveal was good. The only thing I scratched my head about was the fact that Pam was doing all the planning alone at first because I'd think Jim would so be into helping her. Nice job!

Author's Response:

Honestly he would want to help her from the beginning. But if you notice, it was hesitation on Jim's part and I wanted to add a part in discussion why he didn't...mostly because she didn't let him or think he'd be interested.

But I might write another story that ties into this one that explains it. =-)

Okay by Colette Rated: M [Reviews - 34] 33
Summary: Past Featured StoryInspired by the premiere’s melancholy whiff o’Jam. Except with a happy ending, because…I felt like it. Contains a possible SPOILER – nothing you wouldn’t know unless you’ve avoided even those tiny tidbits in the mass media. Just saying, to be fair.
Categories: Jim and Pam, Present, Future, Alternate Universe
Characters: None
Genres: Angst
Warnings: Adult language, Moderate sexual content
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3082 Read Count: 6467 ePub Downloads: 3
[Report This] Published: September 29, 2006 Updated: September 29, 2006
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Date: December 11, 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Umm, how did I never review this? I suspect you posted it while I was away during vacation but that's certainly no excuse! I know I read it, I know I loved it. So full of those Colette moments that I love so much. You capture so perfectly the near-desperation of the two of them when they finally come together, thinking it's not real in the dark hours of the night, reaching for each other just for that connection. You convey the pain and longing and recovery so well. Lovely!

Author's Response: Why, hello there...what a great surprise finding a review for an older story (from all the way back in the dark ages of Sept!) No need to apologize - I'm sure I haven't reviewed a bunch of your older pieces, from before I got into reviewing mode. Anyway, glad you liked this...of course, nothing turned out this way in the show (as if I expected it to!) Yet...I still sense a desperation, as you say (Karen Schmaren,) and all they need is to reach for that connection and it would all be Okay, no? Ah, the agony and ecstasy of fanfic. Thanks so much for revisiting this (one of the 3-4 fics I've done that I actually still like!) and for your always perceptive review.