Date: April 18, 2007 11:05 am Title: The Beginning
I was pulled in by the kickass title. Love the set-up so far. And the reveal that the Committee has already been active! For a minute there I thought that Dwight and Angela might be the targets.
Date: March 27, 2007 10:50 pm Title: The Beginning
Hahahahaha. Best part? Ryan's sputtering realization.
Date: March 23, 2007 11:34 pm Title: The Beginning
ahhh!!! i love itt!! i can't wait for the next chapter
Date: March 23, 2007 08:35 pm Title: The Beginning
This is really clever and unusual!
Date: March 23, 2007 08:25 pm Title: The Beginning
funny and full of potential for more funny....I adore the cloak and dagger nature of the "check the e-mail" signals. Also, I'm a big nerd and really like beta-ing. Feel free to contact me - geinnob@yahoo.com
9 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2007 07:41 pm Title: The Beginning
Haha...I love all the codes to check the e-mails, awesome. Can't wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: =] thanks!
Date: March 23, 2007 06:36 pm Title: The Beginning
Hehe I love Creed! I can't wait to read more of this. What a great start! Thanks for writing!
Author's Response: =] thank you!
Date: March 23, 2007 06:31 pm Title: The Beginning
I love ensemble pieces...good work! Seems like this will be a fun read.
Author's Response: =] thanks! glad you liked it!
Date: March 23, 2007 05:04 pm Title: The Beginning
Oh man, this has all the potential of being absolutely hilarious! I'm favouriting this, because you MUST continue!
Author's Response: =] thanks very much! glad you liked it!
Date: March 23, 2007 01:15 pm Title: The Beginning
Wow. Barely even touched on the subject at hand, but managed to caricaturize everyone else perfectly. If the rest of this is as entertaining as this prologue is, you'll have a hit on your hands.
Author's Response: =D thank you! glad you liked it!
Date: March 23, 2007 12:15 pm Title: The Beginning
Which one is Pam? (/Creed)
I adore this. No wasabi for me, though, thanks.
Author's Response: =D! thanks! glad you liked it! and i think you'll find that wasabi spray has many inventive uses...
Date: March 23, 2007 12:11 pm Title: The Beginning
I love this idea! You have Dwight and Angela down perfectly! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: =D! thanks! glad you liked it!
Date: March 23, 2007 12:08 pm Title: The Beginning
BWAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!
oh this is GENIUS.
thx.
cheers.
--Lex
Author's Response: =D! thanks so much! glad you liked it!
Date: March 23, 2007 11:18 am Title: The Beginning
I definitely like the premise of this story. I think it's completely obvious to everyone that there's something going on with Jim and Pam, and (perhaps) like us, they're tired of watching it. I think your Dwight/Angela interactions are brilliant, you really have them in character. The conversation (over the coffee mugs) in the kitchen was slightly confusing, but I got the general gist of what they were saying.
Also, I agree with Doof, I had a little trouble swallowing that Creed, of all people, would form this committee, but I think you could make it work as long as you keep the wackiness of Creed intact. You might want to have Creed refer to them as Jim and the "receptionist," or something like that. We know he's not all there, really.
That little bit at the end with Ryan was awesome, too.
Author's Response: tips on writing creed are so, so, so greatly appreciated - i've never written him much before and honestly i was a little nervous about him having such a large role in this, but Who else? was my rationale...thanks very much! =D
Date: March 23, 2007 11:06 am Title: The Beginning
hahaha, i saw the title and i just thought 'i have to read this fic...'
but yeah, i totally love the idea. keep it going!
Author's Response: =D thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2007 10:25 am Title: The Beginning
MMm, I like it! It has a lot of promise, and the title's just brilliant. I still gotta wrap my head around Creed hosting the committee, but I do love the idea of Angela and Dwight playing Pam-pong together. Good stuff, can't wait for part two!
Author's Response: =] thanks! creed being the engineer of the committee is really mostly a challenge for myself - i've never written creed very well, but i think his personality is so perfect for ending sexual tension. =] thank you!
Date: March 23, 2007 10:17 am Title: The Beginning
I love it! I'm looking forward to an update!
Author's Response: =] thank you! glad you liked it!
Date: March 23, 2007 09:35 am Title: The Beginning
I cannot tell you how much I love this story and this whole idea. You know that everyone in the office is watching the JAM/Karen situation and I like have them actually doing something about it. Especially having Creed be the ringleader. Love the signals to check the email! I also love Dwangela! Ensemble pieces are my favorites and you've done them very well. Keep it up, I wonder what their plan is???
Author's Response: =] thanks! i'm with you on the ensemble pieces love - i think there should be far more of them, especially in this fandom...glad you liked it!
Date: March 23, 2007 09:14 am Title: The Beginning
Adorable. Totally hilarious. I love our lesser-seen colleagues getting some time to shine. Also, how great that oblivious Creed is the one to decide enough is enough!
Author's Response: =] thank you!
Date: March 23, 2007 08:51 am Title: The Beginning
This is a cute idea and well executed! I especially enjoyed how all the employees interacted with eachother.
Looking forward to the next installment!
Author's Response: =] thank you!
Date: March 23, 2007 08:47 am Title: The Beginning
LOVE this! Poor Ryan and that last minute realization... it was hilarious!
Author's Response: =] thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: March 23, 2007 07:27 am Title: The Beginning
I think this is an awesome idea! I look forward to more....
Author's Response: =] thank you! hope i won't disappoint!
Date: March 23, 2007 06:45 am Title: The Beginning
haha, this is a great idea. cause it really is rather obvious, and they do need to do something :)
Author's Response: =] thanks! glad you liked it!
Date: March 23, 2007 06:34 am Title: The Beginning
EROUST! Oh my goodness, CreedandKevinandToby and Dwangela [and DWIGHT BEHIND AHEAD!] and - wow, wow, wow, everything, from the assorted bits of the e-mail-receiving and the KellyRyan and - I really adored the Dwight/Angela, and - I loved everything else, too. I can't make up my mind, but I know I'm going to love this.
I am going to love this.
Author's Response: *glowing* Thanks so much! Glad you liked it! =] And I do believe I will have to begin using "eroust" in everyday conversation. =D