Date: April 21, 2007 12:41 am Title: Chapter 2
very sweet, i want to hate it for not following the plot i'd like...but i can't because it's too sweet and touching. well done.
Date: April 20, 2007 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 2
this is so depressing.
Date: April 20, 2007 10:15 am Title: Chapter 2
This is a really interesting concept. I like the fact that they remain friends.
Jim is just so amazingly wonderful. He is like, even being great to her saying that she did the right thing by marrying Roy. He is perfect. Damn him!
Date: April 19, 2007 09:40 pm Title: Chapter 2
Sigh. It's so sweet and sad. Supportive!Jim is wonderful, but every interaction between those two screams that it should be them getting married, not Pam and Roy. :(
10 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2007 08:02 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow, this is such a simple idea, I am shocked I haven't read something like this before! You wrote it so beautifully. I really don't usually like any storyies where Jim an Pam don't end up together but I love this one. I finished reading and I was amazed!
Date: April 19, 2007 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 2
"I was here early. The wedding started at four. I was here at 3:15. I bought a new tie for today. I thought your vows were lovely. The cake was delicious. I'd love to dance with you. I've only had two glasses of wine. But, you know, you aren't pretty today."
"What?"
"You're absolutely beautiful."
That is SO something he would say. Dammit Jim, stop being adorable on her wedding day, it doesn't make things any easier. Great work :)
Date: April 19, 2007 07:27 pm Title: Chapter 2
Well, I'm certainly glad it didn't go this way! It's certainly well written, but it doesn't make my JAMmy little heart happy!
I do like how Jim is being a friend even though she goes through with the wedding. It would take a big man to attend that wedding, and I guess Jim is that big man.
But it's sad that Pam went through with a wedding she wasn't sure about, and that Roy is at his worst. And yeah, she probably just did make the biggest mistake of her life!
I do wonder where you're going with this, but you're right, if it's in there, you gotta let it out! I'll go along for the ride.
Author's Response: Don't worry, this will go where people want at some point...well, let me rephrase that...you won't know what you want till you get it. Thanks for the review!