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Reviewer: StarShine Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 16, 2007 12:58 pm Title: Booze Cruise

It was really a shame the twins were both boys.

*Laughs so hard she falls off her chair*

Ow!

*keeps laughing* 



Author's Response:

*laughs at you for falling off your chair* But your still laughing so that counts as laughing with you, right?



Author's Response: Aagh! I meant you're not your. That's one of my biggest pet peeves, and now I'm so ashamed. But I guess I can always just call it bad!responding and then anything goes, right?

Reviewer: mcmuffins Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2007 01:07 pm Title: Booze Cruise

hahahahahahahahaha!  OMG, It was really a shame the twins were both boys and It was kind of amazing that he had so many hands?!?!?!?!?! Bwah hahahahahaha.


Author's Response: Poor little Pam Anderson. I wonder if he'll look anything like Pamela Anderson... now that's a scary thought!

Reviewer: girl7 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2007 12:54 pm Title: Booze Cruise

"It was kind of amazing that he had so many hands. She'd only ever noticed two before."

haaahahahaha!  And OMG, the last line - freaking hysterical.  You are killing me here, really.  I think I'm the one who needs professional help; I'm laughing like a drunken idiot, and all I've had to drink today is water and diet Rite! 



Author's Response: Well, I'm currently riding high on only reviews and rec's so I guess it's possible to get drunk off a story... Question: does that make updates like second drink?

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2007 11:57 am Title: Booze Cruise

That is so weirdly wrong and perfect.

Author's Response: Weirdly wrong, yes. Perfect, um... yes. Azlin is feeling very humble this afternoon, isn't she?

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 15, 2007 11:14 am Title: Booze Cruise

You're missing a "was" after "really though it".

This was so funny.  Jim's extra hands (I noticed those a long time ago - that guy is handsy), making out while sinking, a boy named Pam - awesome. 



Author's Response: Got it! Thanks Kev!

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