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Reviewer: EJER Signed [Report This]
Date: July 28, 2009 11:02 pm Title: "My Way or the Highway"

Fantastic! Adding to my favorites in hopes you add more to it!

Reviewer: officefreak Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 24, 2007 08:09 am Title: "My Way or the Highway"

I lurve it!

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 8 [Report This]
Date: June 23, 2007 07:31 pm Title: "My Way or the Highway"

I really liked this!  It was funny and sad and she finally said she loved him. Yay!  And the way you used the cliche was perfect!



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: carebear13178 Signed [Report This]
Date: May 31, 2007 11:10 am Title: "My Way or the Highway"

I normally don't read stories that aren't done yet, but I broke down and am very happy I did-this is SO sweet! And, you just had to throw a puppy into this fluff, didn't you. :) You better keep writing-and I mean quickly. :)

Author's Response: Well I'm certainly glad you broke down to read it!  I'm really glad you enjoyed it and more chapters are on the way!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: May 28, 2007 02:16 pm Title: "My Way or the Highway"

I am so excited by this story.
Something so totally minor - at the end of the paragrah where they are talking about Pam's parents new home, and how it will never be home, I think there is an errant " because the quote ended before. I may just be misreading it though.

This is so awesome. :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much, and thank you for catching that error!  Glad you're enjoying the story :)

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: May 27, 2007 04:59 am Title: "My Way or the Highway"

Well, of COURSE I love it! You already know my feelings about this new idea of yours (as well as my insane jealousy that I didn't think of it first!), but I'll go ahead and say it again anyway. You're onto such a great idea here, and this is such a cute beginning. It's the little touches here that really make this work: the fact that the Halpert family dog doesn't like Pam; how exactly Pam knows about tiptoeing across creaky floors. Wonderful little spices that make this dish so delicious!

So good luck with this new endeavor, and here's a giant WOO HOO!! from the front row! :) 



Author's Response:

Okay, your enthusiasm is turning people off...

 Totally kidding!  Becky215 and I were talking last night and she said that your reviews were as inspirational as sunday school (or something like that) and i couldn't agree more!  Your support of this story means so much to me, and thanks for being so helpful in taking a first look at my drafts.  A billion Stanley nickels for you, my friend :)

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2007 08:59 pm Title: "My Way or the Highway"

Love it. Soooo sweet.

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it :)

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2007 08:22 pm Title: "My Way or the Highway"

Superb...Flawless writing, realistic, and the I love you moment was great and so in character.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!  I thought the "I love you" moment might be too corny, but then I remembered the title of my story ;)  Thanks again for reading!

Reviewer: kells8995 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2007 08:14 pm Title: "My Way or the Highway"

I know this sounds cliche, and I know that saying it sounds cliche, sound cliche, but - this is the best thing since sliced bread. 

What?  Okay - it was the best cliche I could come up with that would fit here.

Seriously - I love this and it has so many possibilities!  Can't wait for more! 



Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much!  And I like that cliche, I may even have to use it!  Thanks again for reading :)

Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2007 08:07 pm Title: "My Way or the Highway"

Aww.  It's lovely!  I especially liked him kissing her hand.  Sometimes things are a cliché because they're good!

Author's Response: Indeed!  I thought the gesture went well with his Prince Charming haircut ;)  Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: May 26, 2007 07:52 pm Title: "My Way or the Highway"

Oh, lovely, Sway, simply lovely! You captured that moment when she says, "I love you" so perfectly, and I think it's breathtaking you you made her so willing to compromise after he said those simple words in return. A Dundie to you, Sway, for a wonderful start to what promises to be a fabulous story. I know it might sound cliche, but is there more where that came from?  --CH

Author's Response: Thank you so much, my dear!  I realized that I have to go back and thank you in my story notes for being not just a fabulous beta, but being fabulous in general.  Thank you so much for all your support of this story, and there's plenty more where it came from!  Can't thank you enough darlin :)

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