10 [Report This]Date: July 06, 2007 01:17 am Title: The Blind Leading the Blind
Hee! The Jim/Mark banter was hilarious! And, poor Pam! Just the thought of clowns scares me. I wish I had a Jim to call. ;) I'm loving these!
8 [Report This]Date: June 23, 2007 07:36 pm Title: The Blind Leading the Blind
"He smiled and couldn’t remember the last time things seemed so clear." What a perfectly beautiful line.
Author's Response: Aww, thank you so much! And thank you for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2007 02:20 pm Title: The Blind Leading the Blind
I love your Pam... so confident, but also so human. I am not quite sure how to describe it, but she is just ... its Pam. Its both what we see on screen, and so realistic. Gah! I suck with words.
This is so sweet. I don't care how cliche, but it is so sweet and great and happy. And it would be a lot better if my mom didn't call me every five seconds asking me a stupid question, but you can't do anything about that, so I will stick to this is great, my mom has issues.
Author's Response: Aww, you're not bad with words at all! I'm so glad you think that I got Pam down, she's such a fun one to write. Thanks for reading!
Date: May 27, 2007 10:27 pm Title: The Blind Leading the Blind
I'm loving the cute little glimpses of their relationship...keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! I'm writing as fast as my little fingers can type :)
Date: May 27, 2007 04:38 pm Title: The Blind Leading the Blind
Let's see--what's the most cliche review I can give you?
"Wow. It was really good. Update soon."
Or how about...
"OMG! I luv it! U R the BEST! Update SOON!!!"
See, here's the thing, though...it's not a cliche if it's true. :) (More applause from the front row.)
Author's Response:
*Throws flowers into the front row*
Thanks so much, Mose! You know I couldn't have done this without you!
10 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2007 12:07 pm Title: The Blind Leading the Blind
You've topped chapter one, dear Sway, and I didn't think that was possible! I love the little subtleties you put in your work, and the last paragraph of this chapter is pure delight. It might sound cliche, but keep 'em coming!!! --CH
Author's Response: Always so quick to review, CH, I love it! Like I said, this story wouldn't even exist without your help, so thank you sooo much for all your help. And I'm so glad you liked the chapter! See you around our four mediums of communication ;)