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Reviewer: Ampay Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 25, 2007 01:31 pm Title: You Complete Me

Oh. my. gosh. Miss Blue, you are truly and AMAZING author! I can't believe how true you are to the characters and how funny and witty they are and-- wow. Amazing. I can only hope you're pursuing this talent professionally, cos i think you could totally do it. I can't wait to read more!!

Reviewer: secondrink Signed [Report This]
Date: June 17, 2007 10:44 pm Title: You Complete Me

Didn't get to this til just now, but so glad I read it!  My mom did something like this for my stepdad and got him a Stan Musial card.  He got a little teary eyed, not gonna lie.  Great idea for a sweet kid!Jim moment :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much!  Glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: JimMosby Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 13, 2007 09:52 am Title: You Complete Me

Wow yea,I need to protect my couch.  

 Very good :)  very very good. 

 

Okay...lunch break over...time for me to return to work.  Joy! 

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: June 05, 2007 06:34 pm Title: You Complete Me

Yeah, baseball card collecting is soooooo lame.  I recently found my husband's collection from his childhood.  All I can think about is organizing it, that's kinda like cleaning, right?  Anyhoo, lovely job!  You had me at 'She found them...'

Reviewer: brokenloon Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 09:34 am Title: You Complete Me

Great stuff, really enjoying this series.  As someone with boxes and boxes of baseball cards in my basement I got a particular kick out of this one.  This was no trivial gift by Dwight, by the way.  That card is worth at least a hundred dollars.     

Author's Response: Let's just say that the value of the card was unknown to Dwight...one of the many things he's ignorant about :)  So glad you enjoyed the chapter, thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Becky215 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 08:45 am Title: You Complete Me

Lovely, as usual. You handled the ever-difficult task of writing Dwight and Angela beautifully. Another wonderful chapter to a wonderful story!!



Author's Response:

Thanks darlin' (I stole your word, hope you don't mind) and thanks so much for all your help last night!

 P.S. You did not sign your review properly.

 --SHWOP

Reviewer: Stilla Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 08:17 am Title: You Complete Me

Sunshine on a rainy morning, you are. Wow. Thank you!!


Author's Response: My goodness, I had no idea I came in weather form too :)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 06:25 am Title: You Complete Me

Okay, I may have pitched this to you, but you, my friend, knocked this one out of the park! (as long as we're going with baseball metaphors!) Or, to put it another way: I may have given you the chocolate, but you were the one to stick in the peanut butter and call it Reese's. :)

So many wonderful things about this chapter (aside from the brilliant idea...), from a dorky 11 year old Jim in a Phillies' cap that reminded me a little too much like an 11 year old Mose in a Reds' cap for comfort, to Pam's incessant quest to find the card that was so important. And the exchange between Dwight, Pam and Angela was brilliant! I could totally believe that Dwight's family collected "American sports" paraphenalia (probably divert suspicion from the House Un-American Committee in the 50's, yes?) 

Anyway, aces all around, m'dear! The excellence continues!  



Author's Response:

Reese's is my favorite candy in the world.  And now I'm craving some.  Anywho.

11-year-old Jim in a Phillie's cap was inspired by a Dodgers game I went to last week with my dad, as i watched other 11-year-olds running around in their jerseys and hats.  So cute.  Makes me wish I cared more about sports. 

Like I said, you were the brains behind this whole chapter, I just typed out some gibberish and hoped it made sense.  And I'm so glad that you enjoyed it! Thanks for everything, Mose!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 06:13 am Title: You Complete Me

Sooo cute! I love that she wants so much to give him something, even though to him, she has already given him everything he wants. Adorable!

Author's Response: Yay! Glad you approve :) Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 05:28 am Title: You Complete Me

Oh. my. god.  11 year old Jim with long shaggy hair sticking out from under his Phillies cap.  I could just melt.  So adorable. 

And Dwangela!  That was the squeeworthy part!  How'd you manage that?!?   You had me at hello.



Author's Response:

I know what you mean, I think they need to show us a picture of him like that on the show.  Because I don't think enough people are in love with him.

 Hehe glad you enjoyed Dwangela, they're so fun to write!  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 05:07 am Title: You Complete Me

I never deep clean, I deep organize... about twice a year, I go through everything I own, and it just gets organized the heck out of. But then again, maybe I just don't have the right house with the right guy... :)


“That was never a secret,” Pam said with a smile moving towards him and slipping an arm around his wait.
I really hope that was a mistype and you meant waist :)... or else Jim has a wait that I am not aware of hehe.

Loved that Angela helped out... and that Dwight is the posessor of the card.

Eeek! I better review, its a new couch and I don't want a crazy!Tom on it!!!

Author's Response: Woops, totally missed that typo.  Thanks for catching it!  and thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: June 04, 2007 12:48 am Title: You Complete Me

I dont know if I have mentioned yet that I love this...so just to be sure, I love this.


Author's Response: I love that you love this :) Thank you for reading!

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