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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: August 27, 2007 08:02 am Title: Another Notch in Your Belt

Exercise is the best way to fight mental exhaustion. I walk like a kajillion times a day to deal with it. Problem is, walking around campus doesn't help get homework done. I asked my teachers, they said it didn't count and I can't get course credit *sigh* teachers.

Wow, running into a former ex (once removed), at the Jim. Wow.

But a sweet story, because he met Pam.

Reviewer: aggiegurl22 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 06, 2007 03:47 pm Title: Another Notch in Your Belt

I am loving this series so much! I hope you have/had a safe trip! =)

Reviewer: collardgreens Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2007 09:29 pm Title: Another Notch in Your Belt

geeee. yay smilies.

Reviewer: feared_or_loved Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2007 05:48 pm Title: Another Notch in Your Belt

I love Pam's no-women-have-existed-before-me realization towards Jim.  Nice. 

Author's Response: Thanks!  Love Pam to death but I think somewhere deep down it's what she believes.  That's my take on it anyway.  Thanks again for reading!

Reviewer: lisahoo Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2007 08:38 am Title: Another Notch in Your Belt

Oh, Jim.  That's what wearing your heart on your sleeve will get you.  And I think we all like our Jim with a little more weight on him than when he got back from Stamford.  Hopefully Pam will take care of that.

Author's Response: She'll start making him ham and cheese sandwiches for every meal and the pounds will come right back on.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: supergirlsudz Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2007 07:46 am Title: Another Notch in Your Belt

Very cute! It seemed like Pam was going to meet a new friend at first, but I like that it turned out to be Jim's ex. I'm glad you'll be continuing this!

Author's Response: Who needs friends when you're dating Jim Halpert ;)  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: nqllisi Signed [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2007 06:46 am Title: Another Notch in Your Belt

Ahh, the many loves of Jim Halpert. He does look better when he's not so skinny, doesn't he? Great job, and bon voyage!

Author's Response: Thank you!  And yes, I like Jim/John with a little more meat on his bones.  Glad you enjoyed this one!

Reviewer: Cousin Mose Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2007 05:05 am Title: Another Notch in Your Belt

Hello, my dear Swiffer! What a fantastic chapter! I'd almost forgotten about this story...

Okay, not really. You know I have been waiting anxiously for this chapter especially. :) I love the exchange between Pam and Stephanie at the gym--a really great use of unspoken tension between the two. And it's always nice to get little glimpses into these character's pasts, isn't it? And speaking of Stephanie, you fit her in just perfectly, I thought. Her timeline with Jim was how I always envisioned it, oddly enough. ;)

And how many good things can be said about Jim and Pam's semi-heated exchange there at the end? I could totally hear Pam's stress in her voice, and could see Jim's eyes widen in abject terror at the mention of Stephanie's name. Bravo and excellent as always, my friend!

Have a wonderful trip, and we'll hold down the fort here. And remember--Salzburg is in Austria. Hahaha! 



Author's Response:

Hey hey, careful with that geography smack talk ;)

 Thank you so much for all the help, Mose; from letting me borrow Stephanie to your constant encouragement even when I'm ready to chuck this whole thing.  

Talk to you in a couple weeks! 

Reviewer: larrymcg Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2007 03:05 am Title: Another Notch in Your Belt

Another great chapter of this wonderful story. So sweet. Thanks for this.

Author's Response: And thank you for the review!  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: StarShine Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 03, 2007 01:07 am Title: Another Notch in Your Belt

i love this chapter so much! and way to take this cliche in two directions at once while still being focused! and i agree. jim/john needs to pack those pounds back on. 

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, I'm glad you liked it!

Reviewer: PamPongChamp Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2007 11:36 pm Title: Another Notch in Your Belt

loved it...though I still don't understand this upset over "skinny" Jim...I think he looks great, but what do I know?

Have an awesome trip!! 



Author's Response: Skinny...hefty...who cares, as long as it's Jim, am I right?  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: blue Signed [Report This]
Date: July 02, 2007 11:24 pm Title: Another Notch in Your Belt

This is a really clever use of the cliche. You melded well the two interpretations into the one story. it's a very fun read.

Author's Response: Thanks! So glad you enjoyed it!

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