Date: June 17, 2010 04:45 pm Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
trés beau! c'est magnifique!
plus plus!
8 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2008 08:34 pm Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
Just finished reading your series of cliche stories. Really wonderful set and loved each one. The characterizations were really spot on and I still have a grin going. They were a lot of fun to read. Thanks for posting them. :)
Date: October 31, 2007 01:27 pm Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
I know I'm jumping on this bandwagon very very late, but I couldn't finish reading this wonderful original story without commenting. The unique ways you managed to bring home the cliches were quite lovely, and I thought you did a marvelous job writing a very endearing and adorable Jim/Pam relationship.
10 [Report This]Date: August 27, 2007 08:06 am Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
I have a feeling there is more to that present than Pam initially thinks. Because it is fanfic Jim, and fanfic Jim rarely does wrong.
no words to describe how sweet that scene is.
just lots of :D:D:D:D:D:D:D
9 [Report This]Date: July 24, 2007 08:23 pm Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
Don't I feel stupid. I kept thinking breadmaker, seriously a breadmaker? Why wouldn't you just return it rather than repair it. It totally works with the cliche though. Perhaps I should pay more attention to the titles, eh? Keep it up.
Date: July 23, 2007 01:14 am Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
awwwwwww so cute I loved Jim's "did you seriously think i'd just get you a bread slicer bit" so great!
More cliches more cliches!!!
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2007 08:57 am Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
aaaaagggghhhh!!!! I. LOVE. THIS!!!!! so much! i'm literally giggling and clapping my hands like a school girl... so glad i'm home alone! love love love the banter, love the paper trail jim left for pam, love the proposal.. i'm happy now. ^_^
Date: July 22, 2007 06:30 am Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
Swiffster, m'dear, this chapter is the best chapter of all the chapters. [/Roy]. :)
Seriously, though, even though I was anticipating where it was heading, I never once lost interest along the way. The ride itself was absolutely delightful, and I, for one, love that Jim and Pam's relationship has become "normal." Takes the pressure off of me out here in the real world with Mrs. Mose. :)
Other random things I loved about this chapter: Pam's mom calling Pam on the fact that even she has let the spontaneity slip; The impending "Tell-Tale Schrute" prank, (which you simply MUST write!); The fact that Angela's evolved to the point where she told a LIE to help in the charade!
Just wonderful all the way around!
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2007 06:18 am Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
Awwwww... that was great.
Date: July 22, 2007 05:43 am Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
Yay! I was hoping the bread slicer was a decoy for a more romantic gift!! And who doesn't love the "roof of love"?
BTW -- your Angela dialog was spot on!
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2007 02:49 am Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
How happy was I to receive a "favorite story update" e-mail and see it was this one. Awesome.
I love that Jim even got Angela in on the plan. Great job as always!
10 [Report This]Date: July 22, 2007 01:39 am Title: The Best Thing Since Sliced Bread
Oui! C'est magnifique! :-) Hope you had a nice trip!