Reviews For Brilliant Disguise
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Reviewer: Too Late Kev Signed [Report This]
Date: June 08, 2007 11:31 am Title: The Wedding

Good chapter, although I'm not sure Karen would kick Pam's ass if Pam hurt Jim.  More likely, Karen would laugh her ass off.  Woman scorned, and all that.

I especially like the Ryan/Kelly dynamic in this chapter (Bastard!) - that's pretty funny, and kind of likely. 

Reviewer: Alex Wert Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 09:20 pm Title: The Wedding

Very nice wrap up for Karen's sort of happy ending.  Take a bow, Gruntled.

Reviewer: Inanna3 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 03, 2007 03:11 pm Title: The Wedding

I really enjoyed this story a lot. You did all of the characters justice, made them all sympathetic. Which is how I see them as wel, but it's a rare fic that manages to get all the voices so perfect and construct a plot that treats them all fairly. Nicely done!

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