8 [Report This]Date: September 08, 2007 07:14 pm Title: Aftershock
I don't know how I lost track of this story after the first chapter, but I'm glad I found it again tonight! I loved Jim's reaction to the kiss - and Kevin's. And I can't help but feel sorry for Karen, not a whole lot of course, but a bit!
Author's Response:
I don't know how you did either, but I am so glad that you read it all and left all the reviews and the ribbon.
And yea, I love Karen, but all in all, she is just an annoying obsticle. Which i can't spell. Oh well.
Date: July 03, 2007 10:02 am Title: Aftershock
oh, you are terrible with the cliffhangers!!! And by terrible, I mean good. Please continue!! There's a holiday coming up!!!
Author's Response:
Haha, yes, I am terrible. i hate when I read them, but I seem to like writing them. And I think the next chapter will have one also.
And no holiday for me, I start work at 6 am tomorrow. Of course, if I bring my computer... I could write while the kid is still asleep.
Date: July 03, 2007 03:10 am Title: Aftershock
I'm so glad you continued this. Can't wait to read about the phone call. Keep going!
Author's Response: Yep! I loved writing this chapter, so I am so glad people are enjoying it. I hope to ignore work this week and write so yay!
Date: July 02, 2007 08:59 pm Title: Aftershock
Well if googling Pepto-Bismol is what it takes to have a SuperBeta cape AND a lollipop, sign me up!
Anyhoo....
Instead of my thoughts I'm leaving you "whatever" like you said i should, so, whatever.
And that I love this and really want to see what'll happen!!!
Author's Response:
Yep! That is all it takes. I am really easy to please. And, I like whatevers also.
I hope to write more this week... I am going to be working, but who is to say I can't ignore the kiddos and pound away on my keyboard. But you will be second to know when I do (I will be first, just in case you couldn't figure it out)
Date: July 02, 2007 07:30 pm Title: Aftershock
And just when he thought he could move on, a Beesley kiss sends him straight back to where he should be. Great job with Jim's reaction to the kiss. And I like how Kevin saw. Keep up the great writing.
Author's Response: Yep... but I don't think it will be all that easy yet... :). And Kevin is just so fun to write, because that one line :).
Thanks for the review
9 [Report This]Date: July 02, 2007 06:34 pm Title: Aftershock
Sneaky Jim, food poisioning isn't contagious. Please continue. I'd love to hear the phone call.
Author's Response:
Ah yes, but it could be a stomach virus. Which, let me tell you, highly contagious and not at all fun. Okay, am I now debating diseases Jim is pretending to have. I am about to start writing chapter 3 so hopefully you won't wait long :)
Thanks for the review
Date: July 02, 2007 06:27 pm Title: Aftershock
I'm enjoying this Em. I like that Jim is reeling so badly that he just panics. You did a good job of conveying the way he felt, I felt sort of claustrophobic in that moment. good work, can't wait to hear the phone conversation.
Well, ok read not hear.
Author's Response:
Oh, yay! Your reviews always make me smile (okay, in all honesty, any review makes me smile... but yours make me smile a lot). I am so glad I got that feeling across. Because, um, yeah that is a good thing to hear (read).
Oh, and along that lines, I decided I should make Jenna and John act out the next chapter, so you will be able to hear and see it.
Ah how I wish I had that power. I think you will just have to stick with reading until September :)
Date: July 02, 2007 04:33 pm Title: Aftershock
Jim always seems to be confused...
but then again, I don't blame him.
Author's Response: Yep. I think I would be very confused. He just thought his life was in order, and then Pam goes and kisses the hell out of him... but I think now he has his priorities straight :) Pam>Karen.