Date: September 08, 2007 07:21 pm Title: Messages
"Normally, just that message would make his heart skip a beat, but right now, it made his blood boil." Great line, it really shows the frustration he's going through not being able to talk to her.
Author's Response: I know. I just really wanted to make Jim angry, and I can just imagine that reaction. He loves her voice, but just that fustration... would drive anyone crazy.
Date: July 06, 2007 08:23 am Title: Messages
ok, as long as you promise... this little exchange brings to mind Jon Favreau in 'Swingers'. Hee!
Author's Response:
I promised, and they did... (okay it was more yelling), but I posted the next chapter.
And never saw Swingers.... :(
Date: July 06, 2007 07:32 am Title: Messages
oh how you love the cliffhanger! I do too especially when I know what happens next! Hee! Poor Jim waiting by the phone all night long.
I love it, I love you, and I love that you reviewed BeckySue & my story! I'm glad you liked it ;)
Author's Response:
I do enjoy cliffhangers. And I am working on chapter five... not sure yet if there will be a cliffhanger for that :).
And I am off to read more of your story :)