Date: October 21, 2010 10:28 am Title: Confrontation
In my opinion I think this is the most realistic description of how that conversation would go down that I've read here. I think its a little more realistic that yelling would be involved.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I didn't see it until now. I'm glad you thought it was realisitic. It probably should have had more yelling, but I suck at writing fights!
10 [Report This]Date: September 08, 2007 07:40 pm Title: Confrontation
I think you hit the ball out of the park with this chapter. The argument was very realistic, it sounded just like them and really brought to the surface what they've been feeling. And these two lines were extra awesome:
"What the hell was I supposed to do?”
“Stop me,” Pam’s voice broke, tears spilled down her cheeks.
And then to have Karen in the doorway, having heard the whole conversation.
I think I'd marry this chapter if I could. Well, if I weren't already married, and if people actually married chapters!
Author's Response:
Can I marry this review? Seriously, best review!
And shush, don't tell the other chapters, but this is my favorite chapter. I still love it.
Date: August 08, 2007 12:22 pm Title: Confrontation
It definitely feels realistic- I am just not sure either of them would ever be this blunt or honest. Maybe now, though! Oooh, poor Karen.
Author's Response: yeah, that was my issue with it. i was just kinda hoping that maybe with them being slightly angry and it being late that it could explain it. but now i am trying to figure out how to write more because those two just don't talk how i want them to. darn them.
9 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2007 07:35 am Title: Confrontation
Maybe Dwight got him one of those protective things like he got for Pam's iPod....LOL It's virtually indestructable, dontcha know?
Author's Response: Hmm. Maybe. I never thought of that. Although, I will say if my phone can survive destructive hands of kids every day, I am sure Jim's could take a few throws against a wall.
Date: July 13, 2007 09:51 pm Title: Confrontation
Wow. The most honest conversation they've had - and it's over the phone and overheard by Karen! What a cliff hanger. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks so much. I finally got around to writing the next chapter, and it is off to my beta, so I hope it satisfies!
Date: July 12, 2007 03:52 pm Title: Confrontation
o yea it came off as realistic. i love the part where karen comes in. o yea....cant wait
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I was battling writers block for the next chapter, now I am just battling time... hopefully it will remain realistic as I write the next chapter... if I ever have two seconds to spare
Date: July 12, 2007 06:56 am Title: Confrontation
So good, please continue!
Author's Response: I am stuck with the next chapter... but hope to write more tonight. thanks for the review
9 [Report This]Date: July 09, 2007 11:06 am Title: Confrontation
Oh my. I certainly wasn't expecting that much anger. I'm very interested to see where you take this as you've completely caught me off guard here. Nice work.
Author's Response: It wasn't going to be written that way, but when I did, it felt natural in a way. I have an idea of where I am going, but, writers block is being annoying. So right now I am staring at the screen, trying to force my fingers to write something logical. so hopefully soon.
Date: July 07, 2007 02:21 pm Title: Confrontation
Oh dude. Wow. I love the direction you've taken this. So much passion and pain. The detail of Pam getting strength to call because of the missing Roy photos was brilliant. I did not expect them to get into a screaming match. And I did NOT expect Karen to hear the whole thing! Yikes. The next chapter should be a doozy.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the great review. I am working on the next chapter, but honestly, its given me a bit of trouble, so hopefully I will get to it soon...
I'm excited about it though! So glad you are enjoying it still!
Date: July 07, 2007 12:51 pm Title: Confrontation
Oh my gosh, this is a great story! Cannot WAIT to see what's next!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review... I was a bit disappointed when I didn't get more reviews for this chapter, so I am glad. I am having a bit of writers block for the next chapter, but hopefully soon