Date: September 08, 2007 07:57 pm Title: Memories Of Love
"The second kiss was different. There were butterflies in her stomach as she walked those last feet towards him. The look in his eyes, jovial and light, suddenly darkened as her arms wrapped around his neck. It wasn’t fear; it was hope. At least, that is what she told herself as they kissed. It felt magical, it felt as if everything was finally right. When it ended, she walked out; she didn’t want face reality. As the door closed behind her, her heart fell as she realized he wasn’t coming after her. Maybe it wasn’t hope after all."
Another awesome chapter, another beautiful paragraph. I am truly loving this story (can you tell??)
Author's Response: I love that paragraph also... that was fun to write. :). You rock!
Date: August 13, 2007 04:06 pm Title: Memories Of Love
Please continue!
Author's Response: thanks for the review. i am in the process of moving right now, so a bit busy and not able to write. but hopefully soon :)
Date: August 08, 2007 12:26 pm Title: Memories Of Love
Awww. "Sprout" is adorable, too. But what happens next?!?
Author's Response: Hehe. I had the hardest time thinking of nicknames for her. I spent a ton of time doing that. And as far as what happens next, I don't know. But I do know what happens the chapter after next. Just not sure how I am going to get there.
Date: August 03, 2007 11:56 am Title: Memories Of Love
I don't think it was cliche at all! I could really relate to walking-as-therapy, too. And a lengthy walk suddenly turning in to an escape-the-rain run. I can't wait to find out why Jim is there!
Author's Response: Good, because the first draft was totally cliche. I love walking in the rain also if I am in the mood for it. Sometimes that is almost as good as a walk in not rain. And I am writing the next chapter today :).
Date: August 01, 2007 07:42 pm Title: Memories Of Love
That's great, you walk to relieve stress and I eat. We're a good pair. This was really a lovely chapter. I love the way Pam interacted with her dad, and really when you are at your childhood home - that's exactly what you do, you do what you used to do to feel better.
Is it cliche that Jim's there? well...maybe....do I care at all....NOPE. This is too fun, you must keep going!
Ps, hope that this starts getting easier for you...I know that my block is still pretty present. I'm waiting for my brain to paper usb cable.
Author's Response:
I think a lot of Pam's stuff was just because I am at home right now and so therefore I totally can feel the difference between being on my own and being here. It is small minor stuff, but you definitly act more like a child no matter how adult you are, and revert back to doing things from childhood.
I haven't quite figured out the whole brain to usb cable yet. Sometimes its a pain just because once i et off of work, i am too dead to even try to fight the writers block. BUT, only one week left of work, and a vacation, and so hopefully I will be able to recharge, clear my mind, and write and finish this.
Thanks a ton. I will have you know that I blame your review for my insomina. I woke up at like 3 am, checked reviews (because i am pathetic like that), and then was unable to sleep. could be entirely coinsidental, but still :).
8 [Report This]Date: August 01, 2007 06:15 pm Title: Memories Of Love
Great chapter!
Author's Response: thanks!
Date: August 01, 2007 04:16 pm Title: Memories Of Love
Unless I decide to spend all night scribbling on hotel paper or something.
Yeah do it!!!! :) Or have fun on vacation. You know, whatever works. Seriously can't wait to see what Jimbo has to say for himself though!!
Author's Response: shhh... wanna know a secret.... i got bored tonight and started writing chapter seven.... i don't think that i will have the whole thing written before i leave though, but it is a good start :)