1 [Report This]Date: January 28, 2019 12:37 pm Title: Laughter
“Thank you.”
“For what?”
“For stopping me.”
This is a powerful ending (I mean, the Epilogue is also great but definitely an epilogue, not main story). I really like how balanced this story is, and how efficiently it's told. Thanks for digging it out of your computer and posting it (so long ago now).
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I loved going back and reading this story again with you, and wow, sometimes I really like it... other times I'm glad to see how much my writing has improved!
Thank you!
8 [Report This]Date: September 08, 2007 08:14 pm Title: Laughter
“But Pam, it wasn’t just a kiss. It wasn’t just a kiss for me last year, and it wasn’t just a kiss now.” Sigh. I love Jim. and Pam.
Author's Response: I know. I love them way to much considering they are fictional characters.
Date: August 29, 2007 08:39 am Title: Laughter
Aww, tied up in a neat bow. The epilogue should be fun. Yay!
Author's Response:
Yep, I like neat bow stuff. I am ready for the story to be over (I love the story, its just, ready to move on)
And the epilogue is written, but there is one line my beta says is confusing so have to work that out.
Date: August 28, 2007 07:53 pm Title: Laughter
I see my skills have been narrowed down into ",etc." I see how it goes. you can write miles and miles about a chapter but can narrow my abilities into "etc" :) hee. And you would have a case of the giggles. Worst time ever to get those? In church. That's happened to me once. It was horrible.
It wasn’t just a kiss for me last year, and it wasn’t just a kiss now.”
Ah! Notebook likeness :)
But Pam had spoken
Is this like Survivor now? The tribe has spoken. You're out Jim. And yay for Pam stopping him! Yipee.
Sidenote: I got to have some quality time tonight (like 1 1/2 hours) with a certain lanky teller....... hee. :)
Great job! I see you're going to the epilogue, eh? Good :)
Author's Response:
Yes. That is all you are... an etc. :D.
I had my giggles while in the pool. I was seriously scaring my mom. Only way I could stop was to dive underwater and hold my breath as long as I could. Which didn't totally work, because then I would start giggling in the middle, and that doesn't really work.
Yes, this is Survivor: Scranton. Actually Survivor: Two Hours From Scranton edition.
Have (or hope you had) fun with some lanky tellers with no rain. Do tell, do share. There is the chance of seeing Mr Cute Science Office Fan today... :D.
And yeppers on the epilogue, I just need to figure out a few things about it.