Date: January 12, 2010 08:23 am Title: It's For Ages Ten and Up
Ack! I was ripping through your story - enjoying every minute of it - and then, wham, it stops! Please continue your efforts. This would a classic!
But I do have to thank you for the amazing work you've done so far.
9 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2007 02:38 pm Title: It's For Ages Ten and Up
God, I love how he played by himself. Sooo Dwight. I love RISK, even though I always lose. This story is really good! Great job!
Author's Response: Tuna! Are you kidding me!? (sorry I couldn't help myself)....I'm glad that you liked the part about Dwight playing RISK by himself. Even though its a little self-indulgent, I found the idea of him sitting by himself on the farm examining his own moves on a RISK board funny. However, we may find out in upcoming chapters that someone else on the farm knows how to play as well. Thanks for the review Big Tuna.
Date: July 23, 2007 08:02 pm Title: It's For Ages Ten and Up
I LOVE RISK ALMOST AS MUCH AS I LOVE THE OFFICE.
this is awesome.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. This whole story was inspired by a RISK game I was playing. It seems to suit Dwight.
9 [Report This]Date: July 16, 2007 02:16 pm Title: It's For Ages Ten and Up
I have a theory that Dwight is very much saddened by the fact that the Nazis lost WW2.
Author's Response: Haha, I think that you're probably right. Look for Dwight's unconscious (hopefully) appreciation of the order and discipline of the Nazis to resurface in a later chapter. Thank you for the review!
Date: July 16, 2007 09:22 am Title: It's For Ages Ten and Up
This is hilarious. I loved how Dwights language became more miltaristic as they got closer to playing. I also loved jim knowing exaclty what angle to play in order to get Dwight to put the game back. Jim looking for a camera was also perfect. Great job.
Author's Response: As a salesman, I figured Jim would be able to manipulate Dwight in any way he wanted to. That continues into Chapter 2 as well. Dwight is very excited to play RISK, and of course, beat Jim at something. Thank you for your review, I appreciate it!
Date: July 16, 2007 05:59 am Title: It's For Ages Ten and Up
you wrote dwight sooooo perfectly as well as jim's reaction to him
hope to read more
Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words and your review. Its a lot of fun to write the back and forth between Jim and Dwight.
Date: July 16, 2007 05:41 am Title: It's For Ages Ten and Up
Fun story I had RISK as a kid. I never remember actually finishing a game LOL. Please continue!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the review. You're right about the length of RISK games too. With Dwight involved, Jim may be playing for hours.