8 [Report This]Date: December 11, 2007 09:36 pm Title: "It's no one's business..."
This was a fun thing to find tonight! You did a great job keeping everyone in character - especially Dwight. "Love always leads to death."
Date: September 11, 2007 09:23 pm Title: "It's no one's business..."
I love the Creed talking head. It is perfect. More Creed!
Author's Response: Thank you! I love Creed way too much too! He's by far the most random character....thanks for reading! :)
Date: September 10, 2007 04:05 pm Title: "It's no one's business..."
BeckySue! This is fantastic; these are so very much in character, I can completely picture each one so clearly. Please keep going!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I appreciate the review here and also the post over at TWOP! I was so thrilled to see other people talking about it there....I hope that more people find this little fic and enjoy it as much as you do. And, of course, I'll be adding more Jam to it soon! Thanks for the great compliments!
9 [Report This]Date: September 10, 2007 09:59 am Title: "It's no one's business..."
Very funny. I love playing with the other toys in the Dunder Mifflin toybox, although Jim and Pam will always be my favorites. Great capturing of all the individual voices.
Author's Response: Thank you! I appreciate the comments and you reading this story! Keep on reading!
Date: September 10, 2007 07:29 am Title: "It's no one's business..."
HA! Love Stanley!
I also like that you didn't include Pam & Jim. It seems to make more sense to have this all be from the other characters' perspectives.
Author's Response: Thanks!!! I appreciate the comments! I hope to have more....
9 [Report This]Date: September 09, 2007 07:07 pm Title: "It's no one's business..."
Forget some stars in hopes I won't get punched in the eye this time :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 09, 2007 07:07 pm Title: "It's no one's business..."
I love getting emails telling me you updated. It's so awesome.
Anyways, I am nice and clean now, and way to comfortable. So, here I am settling down to read your story.
(add a disclaimer!)...unless. Have you not been writing because you saved up enough money to buy The Office, and now next season is going to be about Becka and Jim instead of Jim and Pam. I will forgive you as long as you allow me to oogle at John every once in a while.
I love Angelas.
Oh, Phyllis, I love how you bring out her cursh on Jim!
Wow, I love TH's that are so in character. These are awesome. And I am only on the third one.
So, Dwight doesn't love Angela? They are just going at it in sin. Or is he ready to die for her?
I love Kevin!
Meredith - I think the bottle of Jack needs to be in HIS hand, not yours.
Andy, if you weren't Andy, you wouldn't be so bad.
These were so awesome and so in character. Yep, I need to tell you to write more. Too much fun.
Author's Response:
I love your comments. They make me feel all good and happy! hehehehe.
And, it's true...I do own the office now...I've been hired by Greg Daniels and I took over last week. I was hoping to tell you the day my on screen kiss with JK appeared...but you know, this way is good too....:)
Thanks for the great comment. Keep 'em coming!
Date: September 09, 2007 07:07 pm Title: "It's no one's business..."
I sometimes like to think that I’m his type.
Who doesn't like to think that Phyllis?
Hee, I'm so glad you added in that bit in Dwight's! Get ready to sign your death certificates people. Which would be hard if you're dead..... oh shoot.....
“I bet Jim’s great in bed too,” she finished, nodding
I think you'll have a hard time finding someone who disagrees with ya there Kel ;)
Stanley! Puh-lease. Ha! Too cool for school, I see.
Andy is not equivalent to Big Tuna. no way, no how, man. Michael totally is their third wheel too.
Kudos on the name!!! So good. I love the little bits of action too, they really help make it flow better together. Gives a great visual too :) Great job BS! Hope to see more soon!!!
PS I'm SO glad you won't punch me in the tooth (or eye!) anytime soon! I would expect so since I wrote such a long review :)
Author's Response:
I will never punch you in the tooth, ever! UNless you forget the stars....then I might...JK!!!!
THanks for reading and betaing and helping me out! I appreciate it! Now, let's get some more people to read it!!!
Date: September 09, 2007 06:44 pm Title: "It's no one's business..."
Oh my god, that's funny. I LOVE stanley's and creed's reactions best. "Each time was beautiful and meaningful in its own way." Score!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. I also loved Creeds and Stanleys. I'm happy that you read and enjoyed! Thanks alot!