Date: April 22, 2008 12:51 am Title: Rising Action
Ooohh! Have you abandoned this story or will it be updated some day? It's great, I'll cross my fingers for another chapter or two!
Author's Response: It's not abandoned! It was just on hiatus for a long, long time. But it's back! I hope you like chapter 4 :)
Date: April 04, 2008 08:50 pm Title: Rising Action
Oh, I can't resist saving fairies' lives. I'm clapping for them and for you. This is great. Cant wait for next chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks just-once! On behalf of myself and the fairies :) Chapter 4 is finally up!
10 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2008 12:02 pm Title: Rising Action
Egads, shan21 -- I'm at the edge of my seat, here . . . do you have more of this??? It's like a drug!
You capture Jim, Pam and Dwight so perfectly. I'm green with envy. You're my hero!
Author's Response: Your hero! And then I left you hanging for another...7 months. Ack! I finally updated. Forgive me?
Date: November 20, 2007 06:37 pm Title: Rising Action
I'm definitely willing to contribute to the grade-improving, fairy-life-saving endeavors, mostly because this was fantastic. I don't really like manipulative Jim, but I can see how it's a valid interpretation of the character; otherwise, I loved every line of this story. You write Dwight perfectly! Scream therapy? Spot on.
Author's Response: Hehehe, I love writing Dwight into all of my fics. He's so easy to write, which probably says something bad about me. Don't worry too much about Manipulative Jim. Our Jim could never be all that bad, right?
10 [Report This]Date: November 17, 2007 06:40 pm Title: Rising Action
Wait, how come this isn't finished? It's really great.
Author's Response: Thanks :) It isn't finished because I'm such a procrastinator! It's terrible. But I've finally updated!
8 [Report This]Date: November 09, 2007 08:50 am Title: Rising Action
i knew it - they are so going to make out. i love this. there's this light touch to this fic, i can't really explain, but i just think it's dawsome.
Author's Response: Dawesome, huh? Well, I can't really ask for a better compliment, can I? As for their making out, well I just posted chapter 4, so I guess you'll just have to read and see :)
10 [Report This]Date: November 02, 2007 09:14 pm Title: Rising Action
Great story! I hope you find time between classes to write the next chapter! Get to the sofa...
Author's Response: Thanks! Hehehe. I found time to update... 11 months later. But I did it! And we finally get to the sofa :)
Date: October 31, 2007 07:21 am Title: Rising Action
Clapping saves fairies lives? Awesome.
Anyway! Great chapter, great fic! Ooh, that table's are turning. :P Come on, one of you say something! Confess your love! :P
Karen smells. :)
Update soon!
Date: October 31, 2007 07:20 am Title: Rising Action
Clapping saves fairies lives? Awesome.
Anyway! Great chapter, great fic! Ooh, that table's are turning. :P Come on, one of you say something! Confess your love! :P
Karen smells. :)
Update soon!
Author's Response: Karen does smell. And I heard she has cooties too. lol, thank you for the review! I've finally posted the next chapter :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 27, 2007 02:24 pm Title: Rising Action
how can I resist improving a mid-term score. I cannot wait for more of this story! I'm a pre-season four addict and you are TOtally feeding my addiction in a really delicious kind of way. More soon!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! I think your feedback helped my midterm score too, because as it turned out I did fine. And now you can feed your addiction a little more, because I finally updated :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 21, 2007 10:39 am Title: Rising Action
I like how you switched perspectives halfway through. Also, incorporating the new butterfly charm was great! At this point in S3 we still hadn't seen all the growth in FNB so using the new charm was a great way to hint at that. I hope in the next chapter you can find other ways to hint at her growth (maybe in her thought processes). Anyhow, awesome chapter as usual. You really have a knack for the conversations!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great compliments, str! I hope you like chapter 4!
Date: October 19, 2007 05:31 pm Title: Rising Action
ack! That was dawesome! I gasped when Jim examined Pam's butterfly necklace...I like to think that in the show, he gave it to her :) I really like this story...sorry that's ruining your GPA.
Author's Response: Thanks secondrink (LOVE the name). My GPA actually turned out okay, lol. And I've finally updated, so yay!
Date: October 18, 2007 02:48 pm Title: Rising Action
great chapter! I hope you didn't kill yourself writting it (don't get me wrong its good...just not dying good:) good luck with your mid term, hope you did better than you think...that has to happen sometime, right? Anyway - great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks Donnelly! I finally put up chapter 4, btw. And you're right, I did better than I thought on the midterm :)
Date: October 18, 2007 02:48 pm Title: Rising Action
great chapter! I hope you didn't kill yourself writting it (don't get me wrong its good...just not dying good:) good luck with your mid term, hope you did better than you think...that has to happen sometime, right? Anyway - great chapter!
Date: October 18, 2007 10:25 am Title: Rising Action
Well, if I could magically improve your midterm score, I would. Suffice it to say, I am absolutely enthralled by this story. The Christmas prank was one of my favorite moments last year, and the way you've taken the story is totally believable.
Love how they started out so tentative, and now they're getting a little braver with each other. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response: Thanks! As it turns out, I did just fine on that midterm. I finally updated, if you're interested :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2007 05:54 am Title: Rising Action
A little devious jim Halpert, ftw? I am loving this!! And i'm already wanting chapter 4...so....get on that :) twss. but really =)
Author's Response: Thank you! I know it's been forever, but I finally updated if you want to check it out. More devious Jim :)
8 [Report This]Date: October 18, 2007 12:55 am Title: Rising Action
Please post again soon! I'm really really enjoying your stuff (TWSS).
Love the line about how her walls are leopard print - hilarious!
Author's Response: Thank you! I've finally updated, if you're still interested. And there's more about the leopard print walls :)
Date: October 17, 2007 08:24 pm Title: Rising Action
That was so great! I love the phone call with Karen and I love Pam sticking herself out there after that. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks Jenn! Every now and then Pam gets to be the brave one :)
9 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 07:09 pm Title: Rising Action
i like it. so angsty.
Author's Response: Glad you like! More angst coming up!
Date: October 17, 2007 06:23 pm Title: Rising Action
Oh, holy carp! I actually gasped when Jim took Pam's necklace charm in his hand. Aieee! I sense that Jim is crossing a line, and I cannot wait to see where this goes!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked that! It was a total last minute addition. The next chapter will be sort of explosive, I think :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 17, 2007 05:30 pm Title: Rising Action
Amazing chapter!! Please post more soon! I bombed a midterm today too, but getting home and reading this made me feel better! lol
Author's Response: Oh, I feel your pain on the midterm thing and I'm glad I could help :)
Date: October 17, 2007 03:48 pm Title: Rising Action
I'm glad to see lots of stories updated. But the ones that I'm actually hooked on are few and far between....and this one has it's hooks in me. Can't wait to see what happens when they get back to her place - great last lines. It's hard to write that kind of tension and make it believable and in character, so bravo!
Author's Response: Oh I'm so glad you're hooked! And you would not believe how much trouble I had ending this chapter! One draft was super angsty and the next draft somehow became fluff city. So I was trying to find a happy medium, but instead i just went with steamy, which is fun too :)
Date: October 17, 2007 02:46 pm Title: Rising Action
aw I was halfway done reading the e-mail you sent and then I see you updated! Silies :) Oh well, I do love it!!
And this Tim Galpert guy sounds like quite the character! Haha I can see Jim doing taht to Andy. And Andy with crazy hair and piercings? That's hilarious!
And i like the addition of the Karen call.
we need to try out that new sofa
TWSS.
Oooooooh and I cant' wait to see what happens on Pam's house! Gah. Well. Sory about your midterm :( Tests are NO fun my friend. If it makes you feel better, I have to write 15 lesson plans for next week. Lame. Let's say 'boo school, yay office fic'! That's what I say.
Love love love it and don't feel like you can't write amazing stuff b/c you do!!!!!!!!!! Trust me :) I know :) haaha
Author's Response:
awww! I suck! Sorry, I just got out of that midterm and I was like, I need to just post this thing and get it out of my head. lol. Plus, you were the person to read my very first draft of ch.3, so I felt like you already did a lot :)
Lesson plans. They were the bane of my existence when I first started writing them, and now they flow from the fingertips like nothin'. You'll get super good at it.
I have a bunch of random ideas for chapter 4, so you can expect an email tomorrowish :)