Date: August 20, 2009 12:04 am Title: ACT TWO
O M G - I laughed so hard at the Creed line at the end of this!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! That's a funny coincidence, the other day I was thinking about "Employee With-holding" and that line in particular. I love having Creed say the oddest thing at the oddest time. Thanks again, I'm glad you got a laugh from it!
Date: October 30, 2007 03:08 pm Title: ACT TWO
Ooh, THAT was unexpected. Other than the drama, this was a very cute funny chapter! I love the bizarre look back at pre-pink-crazy-Kelly, heh. And Creed! And we still need Dwight's evidence...
Author's Response: Yeah, I didn't forget Dwight.... He will find that evidence, believe me! Thanks so much!
8 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2007 05:25 pm Title: ACT TWO
OMG!!! What an awesomely awful plot twist. Poor Pam! Poor Jim! Poor Creed! Seriously, great job on writing the script within a script - very clever. I can't wait to see how they're going to work through this. That would have been the perfect opportunity for Jim to tell Pam and cause her to break up with Roy. It says a lot that he didn't want to hurt her then. Except that he's hurt her now.
Author's Response: Thanks! And I touch on why Jim didn't tell her right at the beginning of Act Three. Well, there are two reasons actually. Hopefully, I'll have it up soon... Thanks again!
10 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2007 10:40 am Title: ACT TWO
First I wrote something along the lines of "How-can-you-stop-right-there-gimme-more", but I realized that might not really motivate you to post more.
Then I tried to offer you a bribe, but I realized that might not work either. Honestly, what can a bored receptionist offer a writer?
So I'll settle to say this:
Exciting, Intriguing, Wonderfully-written, Captivating and oh man I just want to read more - ing. Thanks for updating, and I cannot wait until act 3! Great job!
Author's Response: lol... Thanks! I'm glad you liked! You don't have to bribe, I promise to finish it! (Although cold bottles of Pepsi ARE acceptable... : ) I just hope I don't drop the ball in the third act... : (
10 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2007 10:04 am Title: ACT TWO
Absolutely fabulous!
Author's Response: Wow. Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2007 09:13 am Title: ACT TWO
Holy cow, K! I see what you mean! It certainly was a daunting undertaking but you did it so well! I couldn't imagine what you had up your sleeve. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Boy, I'm glad you said that. You and Shassafras made me feel WAY better about this. I wasn't sure if all of the juggling made any sense. I'm really glad you liked it. Now... I gotta end it. Ulp.
10 [Report This]Date: October 29, 2007 08:58 am Title: ACT TWO
Really, really good. You can write, my friend, and not just comedy.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks, Shass. One day, I will try to write something that doesn't have a serious undertone to it. I think with the Office though, you can't. There's always an undercurrent of sadness or regret in the show. The way that melds with the comedy is probably why I love the show so much. Thanks again!