Date: October 24, 2007 02:31 pm Title: Cold Open and Act One
Act two please.
Author's Response: lol... Ok, then! That's hilarious. You must be fantastic at dinner! lol... thanks!
Date: October 24, 2007 01:27 pm Title: Cold Open and Act One
Nice!
I actually really enjoyed this and can't wait for act two
Author's Response: Thanks! But, jeez, try not to act so surprised! You'll hurt a guy's feelings... lol... Thansk so much! I hope I don't disappoint!
9 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2007 12:45 pm Title: Cold Open and Act One
I have to say, I normally won't read script-style fic, let alone WIPs, but I'm really glad I happened to click on this. You have really captured the style of the show and I'm really enjoying the comedy! Very funny. Looking forward to the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you! I know a lot of people don't like to read script-style stories. Stylistically, it is a big break from prose fiction and it can be a big leap for folks. I understand that. So I thank you for reading my script, it does mean a lot to me!
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2007 12:07 pm Title: Cold Open and Act One
Heee, this was fabulous! The cold open was hysterical and I loved Michael and Jim (just what did he whisper to Pam, anyway? ;) and Dwight most of all. This was so in character and just really great. I can't wait to read the next part!
Author's Response: Thanks! I wanted what Jim whispered to Pam to be whatever each person reading it would imagine him saying... so... what do YOU think he said? rnThanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2007 12:06 pm Title: Cold Open and Act One
I really enjoy your cold opens so to see something new from you was exciting. This story is awesome so far. I'm slightly biased as Drug Testing is my favourite Office episode. I like how you've incorporated all of the characters and like your CO's you do a fantastic job of speaking in each characters voice.
A nit pick...Dwight say Dammit, not Damn. How trivial of me when I enjoyed this so much but there is is.
Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: THAT... is a great point. You are correct. Dwight DOES say "Dammit!" (Which always makes me laugh). You know what? I'm gonna change it. See? You great fans only make my little dumb stories BETTER. Thanks!rnOh, I'm not sure what my favorite episode is, now that you mentioned it. The last 5 minutes of "The Alliance" is PERFECT Office. "Health Care" always makes me laugh out loud..."The Injury", "Casino Night"... wow. I don't know which one is my favorite. Wow. Now I'm puzzling over this... thanks alot. : (
10 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2007 11:27 am Title: Cold Open and Act One
Oh, please don't keep me waiting too long for the next installment! This story was so good. You capture the characters' personalities like no one else (well, who isn't one of the show's writers). Loved it...but I'm feeling anxious. What next?!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks for that nice review! Well... to be honest... I, uh... only have it about a quarter finished. : ) BUT I WILL. And soon, I promise!
8 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2007 09:50 am Title: Cold Open and Act One
This is great - it reads just like an episode on the show with everyone so in-character. I loved the cold open - I'm sure we'll be hearing him say something similar before long. And Pam being Jim's advocate was hysterical. And I can't wait to see what happens when Dwight gets the video.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Oh, the video will be creating some BIG problems...