Date: November 12, 2007 03:03 pm Title: Two: Phoebe
EMILY! The name is EMILY! I don't care that that isn't my real name, I still love it!
Yeah, so I admit, I am now reading the original story along with this one. So Phoebe makes more sense now.
Poor Jim.
Eek. Yea, Jim. I understand you love Pam, but that isn't so great.
But he loves Emily. And so I will imagine I am Emily.
Author's Response: Hehehe, thanks! I know you're not really Emily, but I did think you'd get a kick out of it. It seems like a fun, spunky name. And I know I was mean to him this chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: November 10, 2007 07:11 pm Title: Two: Phoebe
All the chapters of this story are amaaazinng [/kelly] I read it back to back with each of the chapters from Five Ways Pam Tells Jim She's Pregnant. And while never can get enough Jim/Pam fluff and I am all about the idea of Jim/Pam fitting perfectly together for ever and ever; I truly loved this line the most :
….He settles back into the couch cushions, thinking that he's got everything he ever wanted. Almost….
It just twists at your heart! You are dawesome!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I tried to make some of it non-fluffy, I'm glad it worked, heh. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review!
Date: November 06, 2007 10:18 pm Title: Two: Phoebe
This breaks my heart because i want Jim to just be happy... and sad Emily makes me sad too. it's good to know that he just can't be happy without Pam though. I like how you've written this one though. it's good stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks, rulesofjinx! I like writing Sad Jim, it's fun in a masochistic way, but it's much better now that they're actually together on the show.
Date: November 06, 2007 06:27 pm Title: Two: Phoebe
Okay. I knew I would love this, and I'm so right! I can totally see little Ben. I decided to switch back and forth between this and Five Ways Pam Tells Jim She's Pregnant, and I think it worked really well. Especially when I gasped when Emily mentioned naming their baby Phoebe. I really feel awful for Jim though. He's counting the days? Poor guy. Good thing this isn't canon or anything. I'd be really upset then.
Author's Response: Thanks, Azlin! I'm glad this isn't canon, too, it's fun to write but is vair, vair sad for the Jammer in me. I'm glad you found a good way to read them together! Thanks for the review!
Date: November 06, 2007 02:34 pm Title: Two: Phoebe
Aww, that first one almost made me cry. You promised fluff soon, right? ;p
Author's Response: Wow, I'm glad I didn't completely make you cry! I think it would be torture for poor Jim to watch Pam and Roy be parents. Thanks for reading and reviewing!