Reviews For Five at One
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Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2007 03:10 pm Title: Four: Elizabeth

Froggy is such a cute nickname. OMG, it just oozes sweetness. I love their little family.

And I never heard of that nursey rhyme.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Em. I love their little family, too! And it's an old, archaic nursery rhyme, but I've always liked it.

Reviewer: bebitched Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2007 12:19 pm Title: Four: Elizabeth

Yay! This made me a very happy camper.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm glad! I like to give a little more fluff with each chapter. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: I_Still_Believe Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2007 11:29 am Title: Four: Elizabeth

This was so sweet! I love babyfic, which makes me sad that there's only one chapter left! Well done!

Author's Response: Thanks soi much! I'm glad you like it, I hope you liek the last chapter as well. Babyfic is way fun!

Reviewer: Morning Angel Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2007 08:26 am Title: Four: Elizabeth

I had really loved your original story, and this sequel lives up to it.  It's great, even if the first chapter broke Jim's heart.  I'm not always a big fan of babyfic, but this is not about the babies being cutesy, it's all about the parents trying to live through it.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, MA! I'm really enjoying writing it, and I'm glad it's a little different than you might expect. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2007 07:39 am Title: Four: Elizabeth

Aw! That's so adorable! And I love that you get to name each new Jam baby. How fun is that? Also, I'm still reading the old story along with the new, and it was so much fun to go from an angsty chapter to them enjoying life with Elizabeth. Great job on this whole story!

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm having SO much fun naming the babies, you have no idea. Although, as strange as it seems, they're kind of naming themselves, if you know what I'm talking about. I figured they'd get over the shock of having a late-in-life baby and really enjoy her. Cheers for the review!

Reviewer: rulesofjinx Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2007 07:35 am Title: Four: Elizabeth

This is really cute! i love how you get to see all of their family change here. and i love how older Jim and Pam still have the hots for each other, and now instead of freaking out about a baby she's kind of asking if another one would be ok. it's precious! 

Author's Response: Thanks so much! And I do think they would have the hots for each other forever, I know I plan to find JK sexy til I die. I saw a pic of his father, and he'll probably be a very handsome silver fox!

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