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Reviewer: Desslok Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: October 01, 2008 06:44 am Title: Five: Patrick

Great story. The fluff at the end makes up for the heart-breaking first two chapters! Patrick and Chrissy, huh? I'd love to read THAT fic! Oh, wait! I already have and it rocked too! :)

Reviewer: EmilyHalpert Signed [Report This]
Date: November 12, 2007 03:16 pm Title: Five: Patrick

Hmm, Michelle. I wonder where you got that name from :P.

Silly Michael. That kid is going to have an identity crisis with Michael around!

This story makes me happy.



Author's Response: Hee, believe it or not, I just chose it because it's the feminine version of Michael, I figured he'd champion to have some version of his name. And if it happens to be my own name, so much the better. Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: Azlin Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2007 09:23 pm Title: Five: Patrick

That's so cute McG! I love that we got to see Daddy!Michael. I wonder what being a dad will do to Michael. I really hope we get to see that someday. Anyway, this whole thing was excellent. Nice job! ;)

Author's Response: Thanks, Azlin!! I hope we see Daddy Michael, too, perhaps because I'm so attracted to men holding babies. 

Reviewer: moofoot Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2007 05:27 pm Title: Five: Patrick

Oh, you did not - Patrick and Chrissy, i.e. Dwight and Angela's kid?! I just fell a bit more in love with this story.

I love this, I really do. It's sweet and normal and - the last two chapters are probably my favourites. Love it. Love it. I can't even be descriptive about it! - you've killed my vocabulary!



Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much! I love that you used the word 'normal' -that's something I was going for. I'm sorry for killing your vocab :-)rnrnI first wrote about Patrick and Chrissy in "Nothing's Fair in Fifth Grade?" and they've just stuck in my mind, so I had to use them in this story. It's my own personal canon, which is kinda fun.

Reviewer: bebitched Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2007 04:59 pm Title: Five: Patrick

*squees* Oh Michael. Sometimes I want to shoot him in the face and then others he makes my heart burst. This falls under that last catagory. Thank you so much for this series! It really made my day.

Author's Response: Hee, that's exactly how I feel about him, too. I think the fact that he's completely innocent is what has kept him from being strangled by just about anyone. I'm glad you enjoyed this!

Reviewer: janelle Signed [Report This]
Date: November 07, 2007 02:58 pm Title: Five: Patrick

So Patrick's girlfriend is Dwight and Angela's baby!?

Aww. 



Author's Response: Ha, yes, in my weird little personal canon, she totally is. I first wrote about them in 'Nothing's Fair in Fifth Grade?" and couldn't resist slipping in a mention. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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