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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2007 09:25 pm Title: 2 - Act I

"PAM: 5602?  Is that the…

JIM: …day I met you." 

Awww, what a romantic detail!!



Author's Response: kaystar, I'd like to think that he kept that pin even while he was with Karen.

Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2007 09:17 pm Title: 1 - Cold Opening

Nice job with all of the different "scenes" in this chapter. You really kept everyone in character.  And congrats on your first posting here!  



Author's Response: Thanks so much kaystar, I really wanted to stay true to the characters.  I'm hoping to post an 'episode' a week until the strike ends.

Reviewer: luchy Signed [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2007 12:26 pm Title: 3 - Act II

hahaha.. this was cute :)


Author's Response: Thanks luchy!

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