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Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: November 23, 2007 09:17 pm Title: 1 - Cold Opening

Nice job with all of the different "scenes" in this chapter. You really kept everyone in character.  And congrats on your first posting here!  



Author's Response: Thanks so much kaystar, I really wanted to stay true to the characters.  I'm hoping to post an 'episode' a week until the strike ends.

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