Date: April 18, 2008 09:40 am Title: Lift off
Uh, just found this now, and I think perhaps, nay definitely, you need to continue this!
10 [Report This]Date: December 10, 2007 10:21 am Title: Lift off
Just checking in to see if you are planning on updating this fic!!
Date: December 01, 2007 01:07 pm Title: Lift off
ooooo i love it. please continue! it is great [:
8 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2007 08:28 pm Title: Lift off
Wow, what a way to write a first story!! Very good and very intriguing. As for criticism, how mean to leave us with such a cliff hanger! (j/k) Please update soon.
10 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2007 08:44 am Title: Lift off
Whoa. Did not see that coming. Anyways, I liked it and hope you continue.
Date: November 27, 2007 08:01 am Title: Lift off
OMG this is so good! Definitely was not expecting that ending, please continue soon!
9 [Report This]Date: November 27, 2007 02:57 am Title: Lift off
aaaah!! what happens next?? great cliffhanger.
also, dwight in the gas station? great timing.
Date: November 26, 2007 04:54 pm Title: Lift off
holy shit. i need to know what happens! very intense...
10 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2007 04:10 pm Title: Lift off
omg, is jim okay?????? please let jim be okay! i was literally holding my breath the the entire last section! so good!! can't wait to see what happens next!!
Date: November 26, 2007 03:53 pm Title: Lift off
Sweet Jeebus! What the hell!?! Dwight to Jim's rescue, yet again. Can't wait to read more.
Date: November 26, 2007 03:12 pm Title: Lift off
Wow. This story has got me hooked. I love these lines:
“Would you ever try to bang my mom?”
“Well if she’s half as fine as you I won’t be making any promises.”
And when Jim said, "No fucking way" when Dwight showed up, I laughed out loud.
Update soon!
8 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2007 02:54 pm Title: Lift off
I really like your style of language here and I'm greatly intrigued by the premise. Looking forward to more.
10 [Report This]Date: November 26, 2007 02:42 pm Title: Lift off
I'm posting again because I forgot to rate it. I have to agree with rulesofjix. The packing at the beginning was great!
Date: November 26, 2007 02:31 pm Title: Lift off
I am severely intrigued! seriously? wow. I love it. but... did anyone get shot? also, I love the image of them packing at the beginning, Jim in his hoodie in the car trying to stay warm, Pam being shocked that he wants to have sex in her parents' house (seriously is she surprised?) and "So you're the guy who changed my daughter's life?" I can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: November 26, 2007 02:20 pm Title: Lift off
Oh myl God! Oh my God! Oh my God!!! Was not expecting that!!