10 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2008 05:54 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh my God! This was so scary, and at the same time, extremely well-written... I'm going to keep reading!
I never thought I could hate Roy more, and yet, here I am.
6 [Report This]Date: March 10, 2008 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 2
Good job...very scary and intense. You might double check some of your spelling, or have someone read it over...
--Strider
Date: January 31, 2008 02:17 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yikes!! That was really graphic. Poor Pam. =( I'm worried about her just like Jim is, hope she gets out of that situation soon.
Author's Response: Awww, I love the story makes you feel worried just like the character. It makes me feel like I am doing a good job! I can't begin to thank you enough!
Date: January 31, 2008 01:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
Kinda cool, it's been done before, and in my opinion out of character for Roy, but still, well written, grab's your attention. I would have thought Jim would know where Pam lived, but that's why it fiction :D I'll keep reading, so please keep updating!
Author's Response:
I figured that if I made Jim go and save Pam, the story would be over too quickly. I didn't want to take the easy way out. [x
But I'm glad you are reading it and enjoying it! Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2008 07:59 am Title: Chapter 2
Aww...that was so sad. Poor Pam!! I can't wait for more...Soon Please!! :)
Author's Response: Awww! THANK YOU SO MUCH! It really means a lot to know that you are enjoying this story. I will try and get the next chapter up soon! Thanks for reading and giving me great reviews and support!
8 [Report This]Date: January 31, 2008 03:40 am Title: Chapter 2
I really like it minus the short and ending part. More please.
Author's Response:
Haha! The other chapters will be MUCH longer, I promise! [:
And thank you1 That is so nice of you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!