7 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2008 09:12 am Title: Chapter 6
I like the story because I always believed Roy had the potential to go cuckoo nuts. I am just surprised you didn't have her go to the hospital after an attempted murder or at least to the police station.
Author's Response: I understand your point; I had the police come to the apartment and had the paramedics there too. I just wasn't sure if I could write a hospital scene very well, you know? But I know what you're saying. I'm glad you're enjoying this story!
Date: March 10, 2008 08:26 pm Title: Chapter 6
That's sweet...I love how JIm rescued her and stayed with her.
--Strider
Date: March 01, 2008 08:48 am Title: Chapter 6
Im loving this story! I just got caught up and cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, bootyz30! I'm so happy you are now reading this story AND enjoying it! I'll try and get the next chapter up soon! Thanks for the review - Keep 'em comin'!
Date: February 23, 2008 01:08 am Title: Chapter 6
Aw, Jim to the rescue! The conversation with Dwight was painfully slow...just give Jim her address!! LOL! I'm so glad he found her in time. Also, I don't mean to be nitpicky, but Pam should be taken to the hospital immediately...especially after all those injuries. And why would they leave her on the couch if they thought she was dead?
Author's Response:
That's a good thought! I'll have to think over that.. thank you for pointing it out! But thank you for your reviews! they are always awesome!
10 [Report This]Date: February 22, 2008 08:40 am Title: Chapter 6
I was so excited when I saw that this story had been updated. The beginning pf the chapter with all the explanation about how Jim heard everything was good.
The convo with Dwight was perfect. I could so see Dwight asking those questions and then getting suspicious about Jim burning down Pam's house.
The end was beautiful and I can't wait for another chapter.
Author's Response: thank you! and thank you again! and.. thank you AGAIN! (: haha! i love your reviews, they brighten my day! I'm so glad to know you are enjoying this!
Date: February 22, 2008 06:43 am Title: Chapter 6
aww...i couldn't figure out how jim know to come over, so i am glad you explained that...can't wait for more
Author's Response: thank you! i always love getting reviews from you! they are always so sweet! (: