9 [Report This]Date: August 25, 2008 11:37 am Title: Chapter Seven
Hey, binx! Nice job on this chap. I enjoy the background info that you supply. That last phone call--so heartbreaking.
Date: August 24, 2008 03:40 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I've missed you!!! I'm so happy to be reading this! I'm glad everyone is coming out of the woodworks, I miss everyone!
Date: August 24, 2008 02:43 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I found this story a few days ago and really liked it. (I was going to review but my internet ended up being the stupid wireless card that it was and losing internet for a few hours, so I ended up forgetting.) I saw you had a new chapter up and can I just say it is by far the best yet-- with Jim opening up to Jon, I was drawn in so quickly. Great chapter, can't wait for #8!
9 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2008 01:51 pm Title: Chapter Seven
This is a great story! I love some of the badass lines between Jim and Jon. I also love how you get a glimpse of the development of Jon & Lorraine's relationship through the phone calls.
I've gotta run and do something now but I'll go back later and write some reviews for previous chapters.
Date: August 24, 2008 12:36 pm Title: Chapter Seven
I love this story. Ever since I first read it I've been waiting for the Casino Night chapter, and it did not disappoint! Keep up the great work!