Date: August 24, 2008 01:52 pm Title: Chapter One
I liked this. Jon's last line in particular. I also hope to hear more from Mom Halpert. The jungle voicemail was fun. Update soon please :)
6 [Report This]Date: August 23, 2008 09:05 pm Title: Chapter One
Awww I heart Jim and Jon
10 [Report This]Date: August 21, 2008 02:06 pm Title: Chapter One
I hope you plan to continue this. It's great. I love how Jon is worried about Jim. Can't wait to read the conversation they have after Jim tells her.
Date: August 11, 2008 03:06 am Title: Chapter One
I love it! Hope you're gonna write more.=) But.. I read a lot about how Jim goes to Australia when he needs to get away, 'cause of Pam's wedding. I didn't know that! In what episode does he say that?
Date: April 07, 2008 07:49 pm Title: Chapter One
I love the ribbing between the brothers--so real! And I like how you wrote Jim's disappointment being just a bit too much for a casual crush. Very telling...
--Strider
Date: March 12, 2008 04:58 pm Title: Chapter One
How I love boy talk! You've got these guys down so perfectly! I love that Jon's a bit of a horndog and I love how he teases Jim. I'm really enjoying this and looking forward to more!
Date: March 12, 2008 11:55 am Title: Chapter One
Very entertaining and an interesteing way to view Jim and Pam's story....but, that finger in the mouth thing...where'd that come from...stuff like that would never happen in real life, right? (wink, wink!)
8 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2008 04:10 pm Title: Chapter One
HA! I love it. I do think an essential MTT Jon issue is who you think he looks like, though, so please share!
"a little touched or something..." I literally laughed out loud at this and "You are the fisherman" HEE!
8 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2008 02:23 pm Title: Chapter One
I really like this. Very interesting idea! Are you gonna go all the way up to the present?? You definitly should!
Date: March 11, 2008 01:48 pm Title: Chapter One
I love this idea. You're off to a great start. Can't wait to see what other conversations you come up with.
Date: March 11, 2008 12:21 pm Title: Chapter One
This is a GREAT new idea for a story! Awesome start!
Date: March 11, 2008 10:47 am Title: Chapter One
That was super cute! I
Author's Response: Thank you! It's goign to be alot of dialogue but I'm going to try to keep it up!
9 [Report This]Date: March 11, 2008 10:47 am Title: Chapter One
Fun idea, Binx! Great dialog, very natural.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! Seeing as I'm a girl with no brothers... I'm going to try to keep it like to brothers talking. Let's see how that works...lol!