Date: June 11, 2008 04:32 pm Title: Chapter Two
I looked up that video on youtube.
Um... awesome. Holy crap.
I really like this story. :)
Date: April 07, 2008 07:53 pm Title: Chapter Two
Leave it to brothers to point out the awkward realities...good job writing that!
--Strider
9 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2008 02:50 pm Title: Chapter Two
Hahaha! I realy enjoy this story! Another great chapter...can't wait for more!
Date: March 12, 2008 01:21 pm Title: Chapter Two
Ok, so you know how MTT logs you out after a few weeks or so automatically? Well for the past week I've been too lazy to log in to review stories, but your reference to Sweet Valley High just undid that. So congratulations. Great story, great chapter. Looking forward to more!
10 [Report This]Date: March 12, 2008 10:22 am Title: Chapter Two
haha this had me laughing the whole time. i am really enjoying this so far, nice incorporation of the finger in mouth story LOL
this line (actually, lines):
"Or sit there and pine for a girl who's getting married whenever her fiancée learns how to read a calendar."
"I really, really wish you were adopted."
my fave in the whole chapter.
cant wait for more :)
Date: March 12, 2008 09:55 am Title: Chapter Two
That is too, too funny. Their interactions are hysterical!