Date: October 20, 2008 01:55 pm Title: Chapter Three
Just letting you know, I think this is super interesting and I'm going to get through all of the chapters tonight probably, but right now I have to go watch Halloween, because this chapter really made me want to. Plus, Halloween is pretty soon, so...tis the season. That's not right, is it?
Date: July 01, 2008 09:32 pm Title: Chapter Three
I just discovered this fic and I'm so glad I did! I have to work early in the morning, but I'm going to read the rest as soon as I can, because I love that you're digging into Jim's head and the dialog between him and Jon is perfect. Great job!
Date: June 11, 2008 04:40 pm Title: Chapter Three
"Jim?! This is big! This is huge-!"
"That's what she said..."
"Who said? Pam?!"
"No...not...it's a joke Michael does and it's...annoying...look, it doesn't matter."
That made me... so happy.
Date: April 07, 2008 07:59 pm Title: Chapter Three
That's one of my favorite episodes (the one with the Maryland job), so I'm glad you used it!
--Strider
10 [Report This]Date: March 13, 2008 05:56 pm Title: Chapter Three
Binx, I have developed quite an appreciation for this story. It's so dialog-heavy, but so entertaining. It never feels bogged down (I hope that makes sense). You have really captured a great brotherly relationship. They obviously care for each other, but the teasing is such fun. Great job.
Date: March 13, 2008 04:42 pm Title: Chapter Three
LOVE IT!! I've never understood the Jon phenomenon, I mean seriously...who started it?? It almost irks me to the point that I want to name his brother something else, but I never do because like you said, he's totally become a real character here. I also love that you made him silly and a little gross, like brothers should be. Sometimes in stories Jon gets entirely too sage-like...Jim had to have had some ridiculous siblings to turn out the way he did.
I really love this and I can't wait to see what he has to say about the things coming up :)