9 [Report This]Date: October 07, 2008 09:15 pm Title: Devozione Promessa
Aw damn Michael lol. But loving this!
10 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2008 08:54 pm Title: Devozione Promessa
Wow! Another fantastic chapter! I love this story and where it's going. You really have a great feel for the characters, and I can't wait for that wonderful I love you chapter!
Author's Response: You're a sneaky one my dear :) But *muchly* appreciated! I'm so glad you like the story -- thanks as always for listening to me lament about what to do next and being a sounding board for this!
9 [Report This]Date: May 12, 2008 05:12 pm Title: Devozione Promessa
Kerber, I'm sorry I'm a little late in reviewing this. :P
I love the slow burn you're doing with this story. Everything is just moving at its own pace and according to its own timetable, and there's no sense of being hurried or rushed. (Just like Jim and Pam. :D)
I think you're continuing to do an amazing job with this story, keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks :) And no worries, you're not late. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review as you have! As we know our favorite couple doesn't move at the speed of light, I wanted to make it as realistic to them as possible and I'm glad it's showing through that way.
Date: May 11, 2008 06:06 pm Title: Devozione Promessa
Ooooo, a cliffhanger! I'm hanging on Pam's every word like Jim!
I really liked the hand holding imagery in this chapter. Holding hands across the table, intertwining fingers...so dreamy. You painted some beautiful pictures in this chapter.
I can't wait for the next chapter. Excellent work, my friend!
Author's Response: My dear Bees, thanks for the review and kick of praise. It's coming and when it does it will kick your ass ;) lol -- in stealing a quote from our favorite lanky cute paper salesman!
Author's Response: My dear Bees, thanks for the review and kick of praise. It's coming and when it does it will kick your ass ;) lol -- in stealing a quote from our favorite lanky cute paper salesman!
Date: May 11, 2008 02:07 am Title: Devozione Promessa
More, soon, please!
Author's Response: Thanks!!! :) Workin on the next chapter as we speak!
10 [Report This]Date: May 10, 2008 11:24 pm Title: Devozione Promessa
Loving this oh-so much, Kerber! I love the balance of humor and romance in this chapter, and each chapter just gets better and better! I'm really anxious to see how you lead up to and arrive at your big ILU crescendo, but watching this story blossom and unfold has been a delightful treat. I'm so happy to be involved with this wonderful story. Can't wait for more! -CH
Author's Response: Chica -- you have been my biggest cheerleader and greatest beta with this story and I appreciate it more than you know. I'm really glad that the story doesn't disappoint and I can't wait to finish the big reveal :)